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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From Vittani on January 20, 2008
    on the sirius issue, it depends if you have a role for him. If you do then i say bring him back, but if he's just going to be coming back n having the odd conversation with Harry then it might be a little pointless. If you plan to pair him up with someone, like Remus then thats a good idea to. I wouldnt mind seeing it if he's brought back because he may have an idea where James would be.

    So again it depends on whether you have a use for him or not. Since he's well liked he'd help to change the orders oppinions and get them on the right side.

    Anyway brill chapter, cant wait to read the next one.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on January 20, 2008
    Draco and Harry need to play nicely with each other!
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  • From ANON - Dark on January 20, 2008
    Black should continue to be alive. It'd be interesting to see his reaction (if he didn't know).
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on January 20, 2008
    another great chapter...cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 19, 2008
    Well that was nice that Draco took it well. I am glad everything is going fine for Harry and it's one more chapter to the changes the kiss will do to Harry. Keep it up and I hope you get over your cold soon *hug*

    Update again soon
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  • From Lillie-Evans-Riddle on January 18, 2008
    Please write more. That was great. PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE!!!!

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  • From DamiaEternal on January 17, 2008
    If I was Draco I'd be royally miffed and not because I have a brother but 1) His father kept it from him and 2) Harry didn't want anything to do with him in school by not taking his hand in friendship and now he's expected to play nice? So yeah that's my view. I know you said that Voldemort is becoming more sane, but he's acting very, very calm. I'm not saying he'd be evil or mean to Harry but wouldn't he express more anger and disgust at even the mention of Dumbles after all the torment the old man has put him through? Don't get me wrong though I love how this story is progressing and I can't wait for them to find Harry's mum. *grin*
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  • From anniea on January 16, 2008
    wow please update sooon real soon like tomorrow soon and if not then oh well. honestly i like the feel of this story, it flows fantastically (i had a part of the mask of zorro in my head when the goblins told harry that blood never lies)and if you didn't notice please update soon *kisses*
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  • From ANON - Baby Dragon on January 15, 2008
    great chapter
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  • From on January 15, 2008
    i love it
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  • From EnvyButterfly on January 15, 2008
    It's getting very interesting. Please continue!
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  • From voldemortsgrl on January 15, 2008
    This is really good so far. Update soon please.
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  • From Vittani on January 15, 2008
    i wouldnt mind longer chapters, but you do seem to update fairly frequently so i dont think i mind either way. Ony thing with short chapters is you just get back into the story then it ends. Good chapter though. Like the plot between Lily n Dumbles. Its nice to see snape with james instead of her. that happens too often in fics.
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  • From lacuselda on January 15, 2008
    Ohh, thanks for the answer :) I'm rather looking forward to see how Draco will react. In all honesty I hope that he won't throw a 'Malfoys sized tantrum'. But it's quite expected if you just 'poof' and find out that your school rival is in fact your very own blood brother. Hopefully he will see it in such a light that he welcomes Harry with open arms.
    I rather prefer longer chapters... It's hard to come up with anything to review if it's too short. I, myself don't really like short reviews like 'Great chapter! Update soon!'. Those irritate me, so I always try my best to feed authors with long reviews. But it's impossible with short chapters so don't scold me if you get short reviews >_
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 15, 2008
    Oooooh this is getting more and more interesting. I am glad that Severus is showing more emotion towards Harry, ah the meeting between the half brothers will be fun especially cause of Draco if what Severus said is true. Oh and I cant wait for that mate thing to take effect :D

    Update again soon
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