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Reviews for First Heat

By : Jetfire
  • From firebolt86 on December 14, 2010
    cutest thing ever!!!
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  • From dysfunctionalspirit on February 20, 2008
    :) I loved it!! loved sirius.. and the smell.. :D great job!! would love to see more if your muse ever leads you back..
    ramble on
    dysfunctionalspirit
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  • From Veracityrules on January 14, 2008
    Oh wow, they're daddies now. So sweet. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Illyra on January 14, 2008
    I really like your story. It
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  • From ANON - live2luv2live on January 13, 2008
    I really like this story ^__^ Before this i've only read HP/DM but this is really cute and i want to kno what happens next! Update soon ☺
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  • From Veracityrules on January 12, 2008
    Thanks for the update. I knew I had read it before, you always remember a good fic and I guessed as much that it was on FF.net. As for them not allowing sex etc, [shush] I hope nobody points out that to them, as all of my fics are rather graphic in nature! ;)

    Try not to get too disheartened on here regarding the lack of reviews. I have found that the readers on this site don't tend to review nearly half as much as they do on FF.net. Sometimes it can be quite annoying and when you ask them to review, you end up getting a load of grief from them; moaning that you should be writing for the sheer love of it, not to acquire reviews.

    My advice is to go by the hits the story gets rather than the number of reviews to prompt you and motivate you. It is my opinion that the general readership pairings for this site are HP/DM, HP/SS, HP/GW, DM/HG. SB/RL aren't as popular here as they are when compared to FF.net but there are a few loyal followers of this 'ship.

    Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
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  • From Veracityrules on January 11, 2008
    I'll review seeing as no one else can be bothered. This is a really great story but I'm sure that I have read the beginning bit before, it seems so familiar. Have you published this on another fanfic site?

    Anyway, great story and seriously hot in places! Look forward to next update.
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