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Reviews for Potter Pan

By : JBlake
  • From QueenB on April 27, 2008
    Ch. 5 Well, this IS going to be a story about Potter and Draco being in love. I think a little "discovery" about the joys of self-masturbation wouldn't be amiss. Children can and do learn to masturbate at a very young age. They know it produces good feelings even if they don't necessarily equate it to anything sexual or even another person. Your scene was very well handled (no pun intended) and thoroughly credible. Maybe Harry can do it with Draco watching next time. ;)
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  • From Dracoismydragon on April 26, 2008
    i really like this and your doing a perfect job keeping the story. the only thing is i wish they were all a bit older at least like 15 thinking of them as 12 or 13 really makes me feel like a pedophile. great job keep up the great work
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  • From survivalinstinct on April 26, 2008
    actually, I think you did very well with the *ehem* 'discovering'. It was, to me, very realistic but I'm wondering how old potter and draco are meant to be in your story?
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  • From Milva on April 25, 2008
    I think the "discovering" scene was ok. Well, I'm not expecting fairy tales on this site, even when story base on Peter Pan xD I don't know, maybe it was intended but you use Harry name in 5 chapter and so far you avoided it. Anyway, I like it and wait for the new chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 25, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on April 24, 2008
    I thought the scene showed just how much Draco's appearance affected Harry...hes feeling things hes never felt before. It was wonderfully done as well. thanks for updating.
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  • From Hine on April 24, 2008
    I was giggling at Harry's first boner XD It was hilarious! And very well written. No, it didn't detract from the story at all and it made it clear (for the first time I should point out) that this isn't just about Draco's self-discovery but Harry's as well. Question, for you. Is Harry's name ever gonna be Harry? Or is he just gonna be Potter? Just curious ^^
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  • From lazycrazykitten on April 24, 2008
    Oh no, I thought it was fine. It's so hard to have to write such young versions of people. He's had no one describe that sort of thing to him so he was confused.
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  • From Milva on April 10, 2008
    New chapter, at last! It turned very interesting and now dementors are there too. Can't wait for the next chpater, I hope you'll post it faster :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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  • From QueenB on April 09, 2008
    Ch. 4 Ooh, this is where things are going to get scary! I'm glad you're continuing this story although I'm wondering where Narcissa has gone. I'm sure that mystery will be cleared up as you carry on with this fascinating adaptation.
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  • From survivalinstinct on April 09, 2008
    SUggestion:
    Change 'Hook' to Voldemort and 'Smee' to peter pettigrew.
    ?
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  • From lazycrazykitten on April 08, 2008
    Great chapter!
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  • From Milva on March 03, 2008
    I've never read the story about Peter Pan or watch animation, although I know what's going about. Nice idea to make a story, I wait for the new chapter ^^ And maybe is good that I've never read the original story 'cause now I don't know what will be next ;)


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  • From vanessaclarke on March 02, 2008
    Very well done. Nicely written, and I love your eye for detail. I'm sooo curious now about what Narcissa and Poppy know about Potter, and about the whole prophecy thing. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work! ^^
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