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Reviews for Pretty to pretend

By : bodanger
  • From ANON - sinkore on September 24, 2008
    am i detecting a mother daughter reunion. wonder how that will go.
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  • From ANON - Carmen on September 10, 2008
    K.

    This is a really good story. What would make it better is if you got a beta reader. There are a lot grammatical, spelling and canon errors that really detract from the story. You have a good grasp of your plot and story flow, but the mistakes make me cringe.

    This is not a personal attack, so please don't take it as such, but I really do think your writing will improve if you have someone (preferably someone who already betas)look over your work and explain what needs to change and why, before you post it.

    Good luck.
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  • From faerieflightz on September 09, 2008
    Another great chapter! OMG I just can't wait to read more!

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  • From amyfeddy on September 09, 2008
    Don't make us wait too long for an update.
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  • From angelnomiko on September 07, 2008
    wow that was awsome .. please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From faerieflightz on September 07, 2008
    okay I have to say I like this story more and more with each chapter and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. I have a question... why is this listed in draco/hermione if in this story they are cousins and you say there will be no insest? A Huge FAN
    Tiffany
    sttiricks@aol.com < if you want to respond to me personally.
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  • From faerieflightz on August 09, 2008
    Damn this story is good!!! I can't wait for an update! Please, please please update soon. I love it. MOre please.
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  • From smmz79 on August 01, 2008
    nice beginning... i am very interested in seeing how this story develops
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  • From ANON - luna love on July 31, 2008
    @AN Chapter 2: About the not-incest, Hermione and Draco are cousins right?

    Great story :) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Karen on April 30, 2008
    I am glad to see that at the end of the chapter you had Hermione except her parents. I don't like stories where Hermione thinks her adoptive parents are no longer her parents, just because she was adopted. THEY are her parents, simply because THEY raised her and loved her. The others just gave birth to her. I hope you continue to make this differenciation.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 17, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - haley on March 27, 2008
    i absolutely love this, i like the twist with blaise being head and not draco... please pease please post more!1
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  • From TCardan on March 24, 2008
    I really hope you'll continue this!! I've been waiting for an update. Blaise was so wickedly delicious and I love the whole storyline you have going.

    Please, please, update!!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 29, 2008
    i know ive rewiewedc before but did you change the title? if not disreguard the question. i like it btw!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 22, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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