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Reviews for Pretty to pretend

By : bodanger
  • From tinkrox10 on October 01, 2010
    I find it fascinating that she can go thru so many emotions so fast, i would be called bi-polar if it were me. Please let me know when you update next.

    tink_rox_10@yahoo.com
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  • From goldiducks on December 05, 2009
    wow i love your detailed descriptions! can't wait for the next update :)
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  • From ANON - kohana_moon on December 03, 2009
    oh I got it! make hermione the daughter of Rudolphus Lestrange and Belvina Burke. Belvina is Sirius Blacks sister, making her a pureblood. Also it allows you to explain away why belletrix signed the adoption papers....plus you can feed of of belletrix and sirius not likeing each other from his sister having an afffair with her husband. Belvina burke has 2 sons and a daughter who are never named......That would solve the whole incest thing without having to change anything
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  • From chiquitaf16 on December 03, 2009
    This is a great story, I love angsty, dark and complicated stories. All too often a story may fit these descriptions then quickly turn fluffy and nothing upsets me more than when that happens.
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  • From ANON - Kohana_Moon on December 03, 2009
    I like your story! There are a few spots where its a little choppy, but not too bad all and all. So this is going to be a draco/Hermione love fic.....or will they be companions?......with them being first cousins, and although I know it is a common thing done in line breeding, usually its not first cousins. I think if you tweek the heritage part a bit it would smooth it out. Keep rudolphus and change the mother, that takes away some of the gross factor. Anyway its well nicely, and the plot has a lot of potentical
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  • From ANON - Chiquitaf16 on December 03, 2009
    Now this story is getting good, and that whole thing with Blaise going crazy and obssesive was oddly hot.
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  • From Avivafae on February 24, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait for an update. I hope that's soon, we're just getting to the good parts.
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  • From ANON - Claire on February 06, 2009
    brilliant chapter, i am breathless :)
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  • From rebroars on January 26, 2009
    I like that Hermione's angel would look like Draco. I can't wait till she realizes that she is in fact alive in a tub with Draco. I'm wondering about their relationship to one another though. If there's not going to be incest. Someone going to have to have a different mum. Right? Blaise is crazy obsessed and I kind of like it. It'll be interesting to see future interaction between him and Draco, especially if Hermione's there to witness. Can't wait for another update!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From wendymalfoy on December 02, 2008
    I need more!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SensualDesire on November 23, 2008
    Um well, I think the plot is great and you've done a better job than some other authors with this plot. First I thought you pushed it when you changed Hermione's appearance. I know i WAS ready to press the back button when I heard about her reddish hair and green eyes. She had brown hair and brown curly/bushy hair. You could spice up the eyes with cinnamon or amber but not green. Second Blaise is black in the book, and he will be black in the movie I seriously doubt he had green eyes and dirty blond hair. His last name is Zabini not Zambini.Other than that the only thing that was off was some of your spelling and your capitalization. Other than that you did good. If you need help email me or find yourself a beta. If you already have one you should probably get one specializing in Harry Potter fanfiction. And I don't mean to sound like an ass this is NOT A FLAMER!
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  • From redrubycutie on November 21, 2008
    love this chapter please update soon
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  • From redrubycutie on November 19, 2008
    I love this story please update soon
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  • From kitty08 on October 08, 2008
    wow cool!! do you plan for Voldemort to have a relationship with Hermione? Will she be just his tool or something more? I dont expect any love but maybe Voldemort will want her for himself? and poor Blaise he is really in love but i have the feeling he wont get any chance to get hermione...
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