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Reviews for Broken Moon

By : DarkCyanStar
  • From Jan on March 22, 2008
    I do hope you decide to make a sequel. I truly loved it! It just sounds and feels like there is more to it. For starters there's the whole Riddle thing-y, what's he going to do? Will he attach soon? Will he try to take Harry by force? What is his true role in this story?...

    Jan ^_~
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  • From kati on March 22, 2008
    Hmmm... I'm not sure I like Harry topping Ferir (okay, I lie. I am very sure I don't like Harry topping Fenrir), but it was interesting nonetheless. This piece finished on a very nice note and seems to be different to the other stuff you've written for Harry/Fenrir. Their relationship dynamic is completely different, well, I liked reading this anyway. Oh god, this looks a bit pathetic. lol I am reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaallly tired so none of this probably makes any sense. (Sigh) I'll stop now. v_v;;;
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 22, 2008
    Good story. I loved Harry as Little Alpha!
    Sequel! Sequel!
    Great job!
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  • From Sapphirequill on March 19, 2008
    Very, very hot!!! absolutely loving it.
    please, please, please email me when you update:
    no1wag@hotmail.com
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  • From Hajime on March 17, 2008
    wow hot fuck scene...anyway update more more more1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on March 17, 2008
    Gasp...Im wordless, totally.
    Well done.
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  • From ANON - sneakysgirl on March 16, 2008
    OMG. I LOOOVE IIIITTTT. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!
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  • From ANON - Risatine on March 14, 2008
    First of all I have to say, awesome chapter to a very exciting story. I
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 14, 2008
    Great chapter!
    update
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  • From ANON - ella1331 on March 14, 2008
    As always wonderful!
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  • From Extraho on March 14, 2008
    that was HOT! i like the feisty vesion of the couple, definetly. i hope Harry get's to top at some point...... *hint hint*

    ~ extraho
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on March 14, 2008
    Ah... that ending was almost too cute. But, must admit that I am scared for the pack. I mean, one can't just up and leave and travel to south america!! And what about dangerous animals (well... that may not actually be a problem) and poisons (how are werewolf immune systems?) and the natives? And immigration!!

    Anyway, liked that lemon!
    Can't wait to read mums reaction!!

    Cheers!
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on March 10, 2008
    OmGosh-B-tooties.
    Im dieing here....what is this, a week of cliff-hangers galore.
    Someone has it out for me...letting me read, damn good fics and than leave me hanging.
    Theres got to be more to this - please say there is.
    I cant wait to read more.

    ...and loved that it was a long chapter.
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  • From dmnchld13 on March 09, 2008
    Well, I'm confused on if Harry's dead or not, but I hope he's not! Please update soon! I adore this story!! ::MV::
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on March 09, 2008
    WOW. That was an intense chapter. Fantastic job.


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