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Reviews for Broken Moon

By : DarkCyanStar
  • From darkpyroangel06 on March 09, 2008
    I loved this chapter. It was amazing. The feeling, the emotions. And not just from Harry, but from Fenrir as well! I loved the humans. Okay, I hated the humans, but I loved that scene! I liked how Fenrir played it cool and said that he controlled the wolves, and that Harry was the Alpha's mate. The best part: it was all true! I freaked when Harry was shot, IN THE HEAD! The resulting scenes have my stomach in knots. Which ones are Fenrir's nightmares? Which ones are real? What's going to happen? I don't know if I like the idea of them moving to South America. That will take quite some time, although it might be good for them. Like he said, there's an abundance of food they don't have in Canada. No snow, no cold. It would be interesting. I wonder how this will play out. GREAT work. Keep it up! ~dpa06~
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  • From ANON - Matt on March 09, 2008
    You're evil.

    Every story has so much suspense.
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  • From ANON - Pimpshit on March 09, 2008
    ooh...*sigh* as always as is expected of someone with your talented writing, this was excellent! ^u^ keep it up!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 08, 2008
    *sniff* Fenrir does have feelings!
    You almost had me with the 2nd dream. Hell, you had me with the first dream.
    Great story.
    update
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  • From alma on March 08, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on March 08, 2008
    AWW! fenir has feelings !! more please
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  • From Extraho on March 08, 2008
    oh, i honestly thought you had abandoned the story -- you better not now. i need to know if harry will be ok. love the story by the way. i always love the thought of a feisty harry, or even a dominant one. i'm looking forward to the next chapter. take you time and make me enjoy it. *grinns happily and waggs tail*
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on March 08, 2008
    God! that was intense! Hehehe, can't wait for HArry to explode on the pack and especially his parents. Am amazed that Lily or James for that matter, didn't blow a gasket when they discovered them!
    As for the dreams... you are evil!! How can you even suggest that Harry was dead! *lips thinning*
    Btw are there any magic users in this story? Anyway to make a forest or area unplottable, or perhaps an alternate dimension? Or even an uninhabited tropical island? Also, if South America is a bad idea, then let the pack come to norway. There is only 1 person living per. 14 square km, so there's plenty of space to run round in. Not to mention game!
    Update again soon!

    Cheers!
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  • From ZombieDuke on March 08, 2008
    Awwwwww! Poor Fenrir :(
    We needz some porn of these two to help the mood! *nods*
    :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2008
    Awwwwwww. This is heartbreaking, please don't let harry die.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2008
    i just added you to my favorites list!
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  • From ProfessorSibly on February 26, 2008
    *Squeak..*

    o.o.. Update.. Soon. Please!! O.O
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2008
    CAN YOU FRIGGING UPDATE ALREADY?! ITS BEEN LIke FOREVER. EITHER CONTINUE THE STORY OR dROP iT BUT DONT LEAVE EVeryONE WAITING
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  • From EnvyButterfly on February 02, 2008
    Me like-e a lot!
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  • From ZombieDuke on February 01, 2008
    MOAR!!!
    O_O
    Please? I can't wait to see Fenrir totally dom Harry XD
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