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Reviews for Broken Moon

By : DarkCyanStar
  • From Aalto on January 31, 2008
    This is a good story but you could update a bit more often.
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  • From dmnchld13 on January 31, 2008
    Well....where's the next chapter?! *looks eager* ::MV::
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  • From ANON - ella1331 on January 31, 2008
    I love all your story, espacially when poor Harry can't help but strugle with Fenrir.
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  • From ANON - qewrty on January 30, 2008
    Good chapter
    update
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  • From ANON - kizuna on January 30, 2008
    love the update! cant wait for the sex though. who is going to be rons mate? kizuna
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  • From alma on January 30, 2008
    This was very good chapter, can't wait for more.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 30, 2008
    Oh so perfect! I loved it, I love the story altogether. This is just... Wow! I think this was an amazing piece with great angst and feeling in it. I like that you left off the first chapter and began the second chapter with the same thing: Albus' passing and burning. I like Harry's thoughts of running, of becoming a Lone. I like that he was able to get one up on Fenrir, even though Fenrir won in the end. I think the comment about the sheets was brill, and the bite mark on the neck not healing was perfect. He managed to keep screwing around with Cho a secret from his mum? Way to go Harry! But now Fenrir and Harry are going hunting... and possibly "hunting". That will be a hell of a third chapter. I'm sure Cho, Ron, and Lavender are wondering what in the bloody hell is going on. I mean: new Alpha, he calls them out on having unmated sex, threatens Cho to leave Harry alone, then says he's going out hunting with Harry when those three know damn well that they don't just hunt on these trips. They screw like animals! And Fenrir has insinuated... hell all but shouted it at a town meeting! I'm excited for the rest of the fic, really. Great job writing. ~dpa06~
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  • From calmchick on January 30, 2008
    Again, great chapter. Can't wait for another chapter
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on January 29, 2008
    Ooohhh I really want to see that hunting trip! Great job!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 20, 2008
    i really like this one just like underneath the starless sky. its really good. keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - sa on January 19, 2008
    ooooooooh i love your new take on the same characters, very different and exciting, much more angst, although being the the sappy person i can be, i prefer Underneath The Starless Sky! Can't wait for more on both! How lucky we are as readers to have TWO fics from you......... :)
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  • From anniea on January 19, 2008
    it seems interesting
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  • From dmnchld13 on January 16, 2008
    Holy wow. I really like this. Please update soon! ::MV::
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  • From kati on January 11, 2008
    (praises the author, sings ode to the author, kisses the feet of the author) XDXDXDXDXDXD AWESOME. Very high standard of writing, I liked all of the characterisation, especially Fenrir's. >< I am so excited about this fic (bookmarks it).
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  • From ANON - I'M BEGGING YOU!!! on January 11, 2008
    I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE AS IS EVERYONE ELSE! WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS STORY PLEEEEZE! IT IS SO GOOD ITS NOT FUNNY! AND I REALISE THAT IT MIGHT TAKE A WHILE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER...BUT WRITE FASTER! OK IM DONE SCREAMING AT YOU YOU CAN WRITE THE CHAPTER NOW...NOW GO! START WRITING! HEHEHE...
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