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Reviews for Broken Moon

By : DarkCyanStar
  • From ANON - Sara on February 20, 2010
    Wow! I can honestly say that I would never have thought of a story like this! Plus, you get kudos in my book for doing it with a rare--and awesome--couple. And what you did with Tom Riddle? Genius. Pure genius. I really hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Night on October 07, 2009
    I loved this story, but I'm wondering what happened to the other one you had written. the non-magical one. Under the stars...something like that..I would love to read it again too, do you still have it somewhere?
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  • From ANON - Elfin on September 23, 2009
    I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your fics on this and on FF.com. I hope that you will not let stupid people get you down about your writing and will continue to write and post.

    If you post again, could you please email me and let me know since I have followed all your writing.

    Thanks,
    Elfin
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  • From PantiesAreOverrated on May 20, 2009
    ew. harry tops fenrir greyback. that's sick. warn us next time!
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  • From Felinity on May 20, 2008
    lol love the story, just how i imagined it should be with greyback and harry :)
    great job
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 10, 2008
    Oooooooh that was just nice and that part where Fenrir thought Harry was dead was just mean, I really thought Harry had died. If you are going to make a sequel that thing with Riddle would be a wonderful plot, I found it fitting that he still has an obsession with Harry.
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  • From ANON - Hazel on April 16, 2008

    yummy, yummy I love bananas
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  • From ANON - star101 on March 25, 2008
    The story was short, but in a good way. You have to write a sequel. You can't just leave off with what happened with Riddle and his pack. Have Harry and Fenrir go through another trial. Maybe they'll find a cub to adopt. Something else should happen after this story. If you do decide to write a sequel, let me know so I may read it when you post it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2008
    ugh you shouldnt have made it that Lily was pregnant again....
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2008
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  • From dmnchld13 on March 24, 2008
    Awesome all the way through. Nice ending, too :) ::MV::
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  • From bumblebee on March 24, 2008
    love it!! you did say at the beginning that this is short story, so i dont see it goes fast ^^

    anyway could you update the other story of yours? i really liked that one as well ^^
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on March 23, 2008
    Yes, it was fast, but you did warn us. I enjoyed every second of it. A sequel would be perfect, but you'll be the one writing it so it's up to you. I loved this chapter, loved that they still have problems even though they're in this new, perfect place. Predators, Riddle and his pack, Harry wanting to dominate. Which, by the way, was amazing! I like the 'reality' of it, without it being corny. And I loved that Lily was expecting again. A great way to end the fic. Very well done. ~dpa06~
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  • From on March 23, 2008
    Seme!Harry doesn't do it for me but whatever. Great story anyway. Now I'm off to read something else to get the slightly bad taste of top!Harry out of my mouth. No offense to you as a writer or anything pertaining to this story being bad, which it isn't - quite lovely, really - but I hate to see Harry topping people so much bigger than him. To me it doesn't seem realistic enough.
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  • From ZombieDuke on March 23, 2008
    You know, I think your the first Fenrir/Harry writer that has written Fenrir being the submissive partner while having sex...

    Good job ;)
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