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Reviews for The Secret Underground Vampire Bureaucracy

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on June 30, 2015
    I DON`T like vampire stories, undtil I read this one.

    I cannot believe Narcissa did that to her son, but in a twisted kind of way it was sweet?
    What if Harry said no, and Draco would forever be miserable?

    Well, I loved it anyway, so brilliant, how could I not?
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  • From Diane on August 06, 2008
    Okay, now I love you and what to clone you and make all kinds of yous to write more stuff like this. Damn that was good. That was just hot and so cool and very interesting all rolled up together. It's like heaven sushi. I have to say that I wasn't surprised it was Narcissa who paid to have Draco turned. That was pretty clear in the office when they were talking about it. Kinda surprised Draco didn't catch that, but he had other things to worry about, clearly. I loved them working together on the exam and even more on the group therapy. I laughed so hard when that was first suggested like a death sentence. I absolutely love vampire stories and you just made the top of the list of really good ones.
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  • From callistianstar on July 31, 2008
    Oh dear. I wasn't expecting Narcissa. Rather a roundabout way of making your kid grow up. Indeed. Wow. Anyways, I like the idea of irritation or more often pleasure coursing through the both of them that they not only feel their own, which is probably overwhelming enough, but the pleasure of the other. That is kind of cool. Wonderful job.
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  • From Jilliane on June 14, 2008

    Loved it! I particularly liked that it was Narcissa. Who would have thought that by paying to have her son turned into a vampire she was actually saving him? You would! Thanks for another great read! I'm working my way through all your stories, and they just keep getting better and better.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 15, 2008
    Fantastic!!! I sooo loved this!
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  • From ANON - Myra on January 10, 2008
    **She had

    Lol, sorry for the typo. v_v
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  • From ANON - Myra on January 10, 2008
    Damn if the story was not sweet. I ABSOLUTELY adore the whole idea.. and my god! I really didn't see THAT coming. The ending would definitely remind me from time to time that Narcissa is a Slytherin through and through, afterall. I should have known v_v ... alas, Draco got what he wanted and Narcissa certainly got what she had planned. Harry did appear as a victim who had been dragged into the picture (albeit a willing victim towards the end! LOL).. though if it wasn't for Draco (err, or Narcissa, that is), I'm sure his life wouldn't be as great as it was in the story. He'd probably still be stuck with not able to find a good reason to for once and for all make Ginny understand et cetera. Along the way we could see Draco slowly growing up, too. So indeed, it was all good in the end. All thanks to the very cunning Naricssa. He'd twice made Harry's life easier, even without Harry knowing what was the second time all about. Hahaha. Great job!
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  • From misslala on January 09, 2008
    I think this had a little bit of everything. Sex, humour, angst, tears - it ran the gamut of a story in so little words. :D Oh, and I forgot the little bit of fluff. LOL I really hadn't expeted Narcissa to be in on it, but for some reason I think that made it all the better. What a fantastic gift for Beren! :D Thanks for sharing it.
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  • From NightLo on January 09, 2008
    Okay...now to real review...

    I love the idea of V.A.M.P.S, as that is interesting and funny...esp. group therapy - I never know it would be that difficult of becoming a vampire!!! And Draco is his usual self, really, he will forever and ever be a Malfoy under all circumstances...I just wonder...would he try to become leader of the group one day???

    And this Harry is more interesting and cute, he is so...energetic, so much like his 16!!! I esp enjoy the idea of dumbing Ginny...as I really see her no more than a super fan...thanks for it...
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  • From Lacegag on January 07, 2008
    This was absolutely brilliant! What I love most about your writing is that you have this fabulous ability to take something you've created and incorporate it into the HP world and make it very believable. Almost as if it was always there in the first place. The idea of a Vampire Bureaucracy (which works with the Ministry) is absolutely genius! And I must say, there is nothing better than a sexy, vampire Draco. Very nice!
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  • From NightLo on January 07, 2008
    Actually I love reading your story, for example, this one...with the lovely idea of a bitchy Ginny, vampire sexy undead Draco and fighting Harry, all mix up too well...however, I can only say....I cannot handle angst well, when there are too much, I will just go away...though I understand there must be much angst between two different people, esp. between Harry, Draco as well as any weasleys...but that is not good for health, or heart...

    Would you try to write some lovely fluffy or smutty crack fic soon?
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  • From bananasforyou on January 07, 2008
    omg i love how you catch me by surprise with your endings. i never thought of narcissa!
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  • From Dezra on January 07, 2008
    Another absolutely lovely story. I love the idea of a tied up Draco. I'm so glad I'm on your mailing list. Well done. Your a great writer. Dez
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