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Reviews for Quidditch Lessons

By : dweek
  • From ANON - Aranel on October 10, 2013
    Draco, you're so mean!!
    I love it.

    Poor Luna, can't even be friends with Hermione without getting punished. Honestly, he is letting her be friends with it, there are just consequences.
    Okay, now I'm a wee bit confused. What happened last chapter with Blaise and the punishment and all that good jazz!? I was waiting to see if Draco was going to reward her for listening so well and being so loyal. *pouts* now I'm all confused....
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 08, 2013
    I like that Draco is open about his pet to all of his perspective girlfriends/future wife. That will make life easier for Little Raven and for her to make friends or at least not enemies in the future. I was getting worried for poor Little Raven with the comments from Blaise. I am so glad that Little Raven was honest about her feelings for HER Master Dragon. Way to go Little Raven, you are such a good little pet!!! More, Please!! p.s. I will be VERY sad *getting misty eyed* when this story is done:(
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 07, 2013
    Ron was wicked to make Luna agree that they would be boyfriend and girlfriend if Slytheran won...talk about lack of confidence. Adrian is definitely dreaming if he thinks Draco is going to let him anywhere near Luna, ever again. And is Tracy wanting to try out for pet status? Because she won't hold a candle to Little Raven!!! I loved the torture in the common room. But especially the punishment in the dorm *breathing heavily*!!!! More, Please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 06, 2013
    Luna did so good! Her love for her master is so sweet, but sadly divided. I wish she would move past Ron. Poor guy never gets a happy ending. He is just such an easy target. Like Charlie Brown, nice but never going anywhere in life.
    Draco however is pissed as hell! Sixty spanks! He really hates sharing. Spoiled child. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 03, 2013
    Whelp....
    I just read through all fifty some chapters. Now what am I gonna do with my life?
    I like where this is going. Kinda rooting for Ron which, if there is anything to know about my Harry Potter fandom, is not the norm. Usually I can't stand the hot headed, jealous, oblivious, selfish, ignoramus of a ginger but in this story he is kinda sweet. Luna is one of my favorite characters in the HP universe. She is just so open and honest with herself. Can't wait to see what new heights Draco baby takes her to.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 02, 2013
    Oh, I loved the paddling. But the vibrating clip was PRICELESS!!!!! And of course Ron could NEVER take her breath away...only Master Dragon can do that. I loved the chapter...More, Please!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 30, 2013
    Oh, I like the little torture that Little Raven gave her Master while Narcissa was in the room. A good pet knows when to be naughty! I loved Draco's comment to Little Raven's slip during her reading. That was WONDERFUL! I can't wait to see what Master Dragon has planned for Little Raven's punishment for Luna's date with Ron *snicker*!?!?!? MORE, PLEASE!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 29, 2013
    Oh, such a naughty Draco *Draco, keep it up*. I can see that Draco is going to have a hard time with Silvain...oh goody. A challenge always keeps Master Dragon on his toes, and the only one who will suffer (or pleasure) will be Little Raven. I loved that Little Raven discovered 'subspace' *Mmmm*! I can't wait for the next chapter...as always, more please!!!
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  • From ANON - Roxie on September 29, 2013
    Just wondering how many more chapters we can expect in this story? I love your writing and look forward to all the updates but every good story has a arch. Where are we in this one? Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 28, 2013
    Oh, the plot thickens. I laughed out loud at what Draco did to his mother...parading 'slaves' through the Malfoy Manor; that was brilliant!!! I love that Little Raven will be punished by Master Dragon for every time she spends with Ron!!! I will be hanging around on AFF for your next chapter. I'm impatient, that way *more chomp, chomp, chomp*!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 28, 2013
    I do like that Silvain did not reach Luna before she left *breathing a sigh of relief*, he was just too creepy, even more so than Adrian. Ron's whole demeanor and interaction with Luna in this chapter was PRICELESS!!! Loved the teasing from the twins, that just made it better. I avidly await your next chapter *chomp, chomp, chomp (on the bit)*!!!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 27, 2013
    Oh, such a wonderful plot chapter. There was such intrigue (Mother AND cousin) that I (almost) didn't miss the smut *evil grin*! Now, will Draco's cousin reach Luna before she reaches her father? And the plot thickens! More, please...pretty please!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 24, 2013
    Oh, you know that I LOVE you!!!! Sorry, I am late in reading. By the way, where is your beta? Paragraph two - he kissed her between her 'eyes'. But I must say that I do love a chapter devoted to smut, and I loved the Christmas 'Moaning'! More, please!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 24, 2013
    WHAT???? Someone called her Mama...oh my, who could that have been?!?!?!?! Poor Draco, must find Lucius a new pet (and it can't be Dancing Flower) or Master Venom, will have the opportunity to play with Little Raven!!! What a plot twist. Before I read the next chapter (46), I just have to know. Does Master Venom wish that he could have Dancing Flower back and vise versa *sappy, I know*??
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 22, 2013
    OK, que the Twilight Zone (old TV series) music. Did Dancing Flower just say 'her boy'?!?!?!? I am assuming that Dancing Flower and Narcissa did not make friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. More, Please!!!!
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