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By : dweek
  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 07, 2013
    Poor Luna, having to explain the 'love bites' to a teacher, especially McGonnegal!?!?!?! I don't think that we have seen the last of Ron, trying to protect Luna. Maybe he has finally noticed her and will make a move. I know that Adrian will punish Luna, the only question is how much and will Draco have to interfere *oh, I hope so*!!!! As always, More...Please!!!!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 06, 2013
    Teacher - Snape!!!! I have just gotten caught up on this story. I am in LOVE with this story *wicked Dom Draco*!?!?!?!?! I like how Ron has now noticed and stands up for Luna. But it is too late, she is in too deep as a submissive for Draco. I can't wait to see what Draco has planned. More, Please!!!!!!
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  • From azalea33 on September 06, 2013
    That's a hard choice. When I read it, I heard McGonagall, and since she's a woman, it might work out better for Luna, plus she's Ron's HoH. But Snape is Adrian and Draco's HoH, so it might make more sense depending on where you are going with whatever happens next. I can see it working both ways. I guess you can put me down for McGonagall, but either way, I'll be happy.
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  • From ANON - Albino on September 06, 2013
    I vote for Mcgonagall. But you should publish the other viersion of the chapter alone so we can read that one to
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on August 18, 2013
    I must admit, I don't usually like such a slow build. But this one is soooo HOT!!!

    I love that Draco has Luna under his spell. I hope that Luna writes in her journal about being a 'slut'. I think that Draco will be able to use that as he moves Luna to the next stage.

    Can we have some more of Luna's dreams with her collar and leash on?!?!?!!? Also, when will her current boyfriend try to cross the line that Draco (Her Master) has drawn? How will she and HE be punished. I hope her boyfriend Adrian (sp) gets severely punished by Draco. Plus Pansy, needs a good spanking...maybe by Luna (only as a reward).

    More, please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Magnus on July 14, 2013
    I'm glad to see you've resumed this one. I enjoy stories like this, but they're so hard to find. Personally, i'm looking forward to Luna's next leash caused dream. It should Definately be interesting. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - laila on December 30, 2012
    Update please :)

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  • From Tenshinhan on March 31, 2010
    I love the couple, and really like the concept. I haven't finished the story yet, so I can't say what I think of that right now.
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on December 23, 2008
    I adore this story! I like how you use Draco's bullying tendancy to gain control over Luna & I really like how you portray his manipulating side. Great chapter! Looking forward to more!!
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  • From SalonKitty on October 24, 2008
    Sorry, I just thought I'd point out that it's Ancient Runes, not ruins.

    Sounds like Pansy is enjoying her opportunity to play the Master for once. I love how surprised Luna is to the way boys are reacting to her. She's such an endearing figure and my heart always goes out to her when she's been hurt. I worry for her state of mind once Draco's through with her.
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  • From SalonKitty on October 24, 2008
    Well, I'm up to Chapter 5 and really intrigued. It's going at a nice pace, and the motivations are still believable. I confess that I find Luna a perfect sub, and I've been ruminating over my own plot bunny for her. I like that you are not making her so out there that her every other word is some unintelligible nonsense creature. She's still odd, yet entrenched in the same life and pursuits as her classmates.

    Your Draco is going pretty well, too. I don't really like him much as a character and don't often read anything centered around him unless he's solely the antagonist, but here you keep him in character as an arrogant teen with a penchant for bullying without making him ridiculously cruel and malicious. And you obviously aren't going for fluff, either, which is good. I think the pair will make an interesting couple to watch. I'm very curious to see how Luna will continue to respond to Draco's commands as he pushes her further and further.

    Now you're going to go and make me start up a Harry/Luna just to keep the Luna love flowing!
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on September 29, 2008
    I'm so glad you managed to update this story! It's just gotten even more interesting, Draco is such a sneaky git! lol.
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on May 30, 2008
    update
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on May 15, 2008
    I'm guessing that Goyle poked that guy in the eye on Draco's orders cos he was jealous. If that's right then perhaps Draco could be worrying about losing Luna/ his power over her and steps up his game, how u would do that would of coruse be depending on what Draco really wants from Luna, whether it's all a game or he does actually want her. Or perhaps he could read her journal and find out what Pansy did to her and be very annoyed over Pansy tyring to control Luna as well, he doesn't seem the type to want to share at all. Whether he would punish Luna for obeying or Pansy for going too far would be ur choice or even have him worrying that Luna wouldn't want to contiue her "lessons" if Pansy was going to be involved and he could offer to make it up to her.
    That's all I could think of at the moment, it all depends on where you want to go with the story. Hope you find inspiration soon, it's one of my fave stories on this site
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on May 13, 2008
    please update
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