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Reviews for Quidditch Lessons

By : dweek
  • From Jessy8 on May 10, 2008
    Hmm interesting story. But maybe go into different aspects. Like you said he got her better robes. Now are they like normal robes or supper tight cleavage robes? Like is he making her look like a classey lady or a slut?
    How is the rest of the school seeing her, besides that she dress's better. Is she more obedient to everyone?
    It's obvious Draco has her under his thumb now, why doesn't he progress?
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on April 15, 2008
    is Anthony an original character? I didn't think there were that many Jews in the wizarding world
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on March 30, 2008
    I would love it if Pansy ended up losing Draco to Luna in the end, how she can lose something she never had I'm not sure, but I guess you know what I mean lol. Goyle's reasoning had me laughing, poking someone in the eye over a cupcake lol, although I do have the feeling it was more down to Draco and his jealousy than anything else lol. This story is coming along nicely! Keep up the good work!
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on March 25, 2008
    I have the feeling that Draco was rather jealous that Luna was asked out because he really wants her for himself lol, hope so it would serve his right! lol. I really love how this story is coming along. Hope you update this one again soon!
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  • From goldentrio on March 24, 2008
    I sense that Draco was a little jealous about Anthony asking her out...or at least I hope so. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 23, 2008
    This fic still is interesting to me...I'm still with you. I wonder what he's planning and how Pansy will actually treat her. I'm glad to see that other boys are interested in her and I hope that Draco eventually treats her better or at least starts to care for her...although I can't deny what he's doing with her is damn sexy.
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on March 18, 2008
    I have the feeling she is probably dreaming about Draco, although that could just be wishful thinking on my part as I love the pairing! lol. I'm glad your continuing with this story. Update again soon!
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on March 17, 2008
    great so far: smooth transitioning, Draco is a devious bastard, Pansy worships his cock, and Luna has that charming innocence to her
    keep up the good work
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on February 08, 2008
    It's very odd how whenever I check back to this site you've updated my fave story lol. Another good chapter, love it as always.
    I'm just a teeny bit confused at this chapter though. My understanding was that Draco was telling Luna that he was helping her to get Ron when really it was all for him, that he in fact wants her for himself & has no intention of her ever being with Ron. Is that right?

    Hope you update this one again soon!
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  • From Slytherinsheir on February 04, 2008
    Very good fic there ^_^

    I am getting to like the pairing. This one works well, the dominant Draco and the slightly naive learning Luna. Looking forward to reading more from you!
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on February 02, 2008
    Draco is such a rat! lol. You write his sneaky, devious, manipulating side very well. I'm enjoying this story a lot. Well done! Hope you update again soon.
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on January 20, 2008
    Another good chapter. I feel a bit sorry for poor Pansy at the moment though, & I'm actually laughing in advance to Luna's reaction of Draco's little present for her. He is such a sneaky git in this fic! I think this is one of my fave stories & I hope you update again soon!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 19, 2008
    I'm enjoying this story. You don't see a lot of Draco/Luna pairings and that's so funny because if you visually picture them, they seem perfect for each other. I like how he's portrayed in this, it's not over the top, but maintains his basic characteristics, and you've fleshed out Luna well. Very sexy story...
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on January 13, 2008
    I'm glad you've updated so soon & hope you will again as soon as you can. I'm enjoying this story a lot due to the actual plot behind it. I like the way you characterize Draco & stick to his arrogance etc. This story is moving along nicely, & not speeding into any sex scenes which is a good thing. Keep up the good work!
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  • From PensievePerson on January 13, 2008
    Okay wow. So Draco treats Pansy almost the same as he does Luna when he's taking her...Like in calling Pansy "pet" as well. Hmmm, surprising...I suggest, though you probably already have this in mind...I suggest having Pansy find out what Draco is up to with Luna! That would really shock her.
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