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Reviews for Very Nearly Veela

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Alex on January 13, 2008
    Oh la la, getting intenseee
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 13, 2008
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 12, 2008
    Calamine Horn: Well, I thought your writing excellent. Readers know what they like and that can make good fodder for writing your own stuff. That's how I started out . . . wanting more then having to come up with my own stories to entertain me. lol at your "selfish reasons" for posting that chapter. I can understand it. When I write, I suspend my personal feelings. I often write things completely unacceptable to who I am as a person, but with the thought in mind that even though I might not like it, these things can happen and do. So I do my best to let the story ride without anything personal shining through. Some might construe I think such things as rape and non-consenual sex are okay. In the real world, no. But in a story it can happen. There has to be some conflict, some things that make us uncomfortable, because let's face it, that's how the real world works. If it had been me alone, I would have kept what the Veela are doing impersonal and cold, focused and purposeful. There would have been no remorse because what is one human compared to the continuance of a race? It's desperation. Desperate individuals think only of their needs. But on the other hand, I knew immediately what you were doing and why, and it is fine with me and does add something to the story at least on the part of one Veela. Like I said, it shows they aren't all monsters. Again, I say thanks for contributing. I'm also flattered that you made an account just to contribute. I really think you should start writing your own stories. You have a certain storytelling ability that I really like. Maybe we'll see something from you in the future. **** I don't think it will be smut though. lololol.
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  • From calaminehorn on January 12, 2008
    I won't pretend I'm a good writer, but as a reader, I didn't want Hermione to be so ruthlessly taken advantage of. I had selfish reasons for posting, I wanted the Veela's to feel for her, and I wanted her to start figuring it out. I pretty much just threw in opportunities for fluffiness. ^^ Though I'm very happy with Miss Figg making the situation so much more realistic and deep. I actually started writing a review when I thought "Hey wait a minute... anyone can post right?" So I up and made an account and voila.

    Anyway, I apologize for all the errors and overall crappiness, I turned it out quickly. At least it's short! ^^
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 12, 2008
    Ah, a touch of humanity, remorse and guilt on the part of at least one Veela. It was disturbing, but compelling and made Morthan seem less of a monster in one aspect, but still made what they were doing as a whole seem more so, even if it is for the survival of the species. A nice touch to make Hermione aware that her sense of touch was off, and that the elixir helped to make her more fertile. Also that she was beginning to see through the illusion. Thanks for the chapter, Calamine Horn. *** And the saga continues.
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  • From ANON - Mara on January 12, 2008
    Well...it started good even if I don't like Veela storys that much...but this fic is not really my liking. That is because I don't like it when somebody is being raped. Constantly and I prefer just SS/HG storys. I hope that Ms_Figg will continue soon with her own fanfics.But nevertheless it is wonderful how you're working together. Every author earns a praise.
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  • From ANON - hh on January 12, 2008
    the sex scene was terrible.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 12, 2008
    Nice save.
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 12, 2008
    Ev: This story is being added to by other writers so there will be differing styles, voices, plot twists etc. I may add a chapter here or there but I'm hoping that others will continue to contribute to it, using what's gone before.
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  • From ANON - Ev on January 12, 2008
    There you are!

    I was wondering where you went for a while. It was all so terribly fluffy and rather too happy for it to be your style. Then you unveil this chapter and it rocks my world with the twists! It's so you. I love it!

    I can't wait until the next installment. I'll be checking back frequently.
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  • From ANON - Solomon on January 12, 2008
    Somebody please give me more Please compleete this Somebody Please Please Please finish this story please email me when you do Thank you
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  • From theorgskittles on January 12, 2008
    This story is doing good so far... I am not ready to add a Story yet or a chapter to this story... I feel I would muck it up and I do not want to do that lol But real good so far
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  • From Queeny on January 12, 2008
    Haha those two chapter updates were great, I got a few chuckles out of them as well, except I dont know what to put up next. xD;; Oh well good thing I'm not the only one contributing! :)


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  • From ANON - i'llremainanonfornow on January 12, 2008
    Ms-Figg, take over the story dammit! or you write a seperate version of it. im not into this veela thing so that was pretty bearable for me. but dont you EVER do this to your other PWPs. ^_^ let them be one shots or YOU continue them. but its nice you are letting other authors continue - but woman! you've spoilt us for any other authors ok, see! im throwing a temper tantrum here.
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 11, 2008
    It sounds like the beginning of an awesome story. Keep writing! :)
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