Reviews for Vox Corporis: RebirthBy : egb67 |
Hi. I'm a little confused, as I thought this was a sequel to Vox Corporis. The changes were from movie to book, as well as the last chapters vs. the new chapters. Its still a great story as am now in chapter 10/11.
Great story so far, thank you. I'm looking forward to the next installment. I love the development of Molly's story, your portrayal of Harry and Hermione and the growing story of Ron's quest.
Keep up the lovely work.
Despite the far too sloppy lovey-doveyness, this is a good story and I would appreciate notice of any updates.
Why would Poppy unbind and wake Rowena up? As the powerful Healer that she is, she would have been more than able to restrain Rowena. Harry, having absorbed or deflected all Rowena's spells, could have easily restrained her or stupified her wthout causing unnecessary physical damage. The whole scene was unnecessary.
I am enjoying this story very much and it fits nicely withMissAnthropic's story. I must tell you though, that you got your latin wrong. REPROBO VERITAS means REJECT TRUTH. Loquitur veritatem (Speak only the truth) is probably what you needed.
Regards, Dave.
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