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Reviews for Temptations

By : Nikkilicious
  • From chickaboo on February 22, 2008
    Oh wow. I'm addicted to this story! I've been meaning to start reading sooner but I try not to read too many different stories all at once cause then they get all muddled up in my head but I just couldn't resist anymore and I am so happy that I finally gave in! This is SO good! But I can't help but wonder what's going to happen once they finally get through all the temptations. They don't seem to be getting along any better, of course none of the 7 deadly sins are exactly conducive to the warm and fuzzies. Anyway, I can't wait to read more and I hope you can update again soon!
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  • From AlexisRose on February 14, 2008
    Yay lust! This is a really great story line and you're doing such a great job with it! Please post more soon! And happy vday!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 12, 2008
    omg more!!!!
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  • From Given2Fly on February 11, 2008
    You. Are. Evil.

    Update, woman! Update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on February 10, 2008
    Ahh!!! Please continue! There are so many Dramione fics out there with absolutely no imaginative plot whatsoever, so this story is a breath of fresh air! Please update as soon as possible!!
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  • From ANON - Dani on February 06, 2008
    Really liking the story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - InTheShadows on February 06, 2008
    omg. i love this story. i come on this site just to see if you have updated. i cant wait for the next chappy!
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  • From ANON - Anathema on February 06, 2008
    Update, update, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

    I'm literally DYING to read what happens in the "Lust" chapters!!!!!!!!
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  • From AlexisRose on February 04, 2008
    Amazing!! I really look forward to your updates, and I just want more : ) Soooo please update soon!
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  • From LolaDiBlack on February 04, 2008
    Come on more more more
    ok i'm going to wait like a patience person
    that I'M not (because of school), I going to breath in and out to calm
    myself because i'm static, What the hell is going to happen?
    will they kill each other O_o? will they get through it?
    will the others go nutters? O_o I don't know
    so please pretty please update soon
    take care and take it easy

    Lots of Love
    Lola
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  • From Tassanaburrfoot on February 01, 2008
    This is an awesome story. Funny, charming, and... tempting. I love how you placed them through the 7 deadly sins. I wonder which one they'll get next?

    Can I make a small suggestion? Instead of using the --- for your lines, just put up < hr > (without the spaces.) Using all those --- makes the page longer and a bit harder to read. Not much harder, but a bit. The < hr > makes a nice, long, even line that will fit the page perfectly. Like this:


    And it gives you some space between the story and your words. Just a suggestion.

    It is a great story. I have it bookmarked so I can easily check for updates.
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  • From curikitten on January 30, 2008
    Ooh. Okay, so we've done away with gluttony, sloth, and avarice. That leaves lust (the easiest to remember), rage, shit. Christians make everything so difficult. Bad, good, seven things that'll send you straight to hell... please, who hasn't lusted? I've got to go Google or else I'll go nuts.

    Right, so there's lust (I bet that one gets fun.), wrath, envy, and pride. I really like this concept, because it seems pretty original to me. It also does fun things with my brain where I try to figure out why a Christian conceit has made its way into the Magical World. I'm willing to bet that it's not actually an issue in this story, but I still wonder. Gah, brain.
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  • From ANON - Dracoisahottie on January 29, 2008
    This is amazing. Love the plot and the interactions with the characters who are actually in character. This is so good please continue!
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  • From LydiaBright on January 28, 2008
    As much as I love the idea behind the story and what little I was able to read, I can not continue. Why? It's a simple thing really, and I don't know quite what causes it, but your story forces me to side scroll just to read a couple words that go off screen. And it doesn't happen in chapter 1..which I found odd. It just breaks the rhythm if someone has to keep moving back and forth like that to read it.
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  • From Juls52 on January 28, 2008
    OMG that was an awesome dd!! i love this fic soo mcuh!! i can't blieve how funny it is that u know the 7 deadly sin that they are going 2 encounter & u read it knowing that at some point that's what they are experienceing , but its oblivious 2 them.. 2 words for this fic.. Pure Genius!!!
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