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Reviews for Temptations

By : Nikkilicious
  • From ANON - Adriana on January 27, 2008
    Just wanted to tell you that you have a wonderful story going here. I've never read anything like it and it's great to read something so different to the other stories that are posted. Keep up the great work and good luck for any future projects.
    Can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From PotterEntourage on January 24, 2008
    Great story! I'm loving this, I read it on my phone on ff.net, and I'm hooked. Great concept, and I love your Hermione, you can feel her hurt from Draco's insults, he's so mean, but I love your Draco, cuz he's mean, yet spoiled and funny! Keep it up, I'll be waiting for greed! Looking forward to lust though! *blush*
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  • From Jadeaffection on January 24, 2008
    This story is super cool. and I just turned into Jan Brady! Stop me before I start describing it as Groovy. Love it and I love how well you have kept them in character. Draco talking about his funeral and how the girls should cry = me laughing my a#*e off. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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  • From AlexisRose on January 24, 2008
    That was such a good chapter! I'm really enjoying this story, it's so creative. Is it bad that I don't know what the seven deadly sins are and I'm only learning them by reading your fic? Lol, well I'm def looking forward to the next one! Update soon!
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  • From Juls52 on January 23, 2008
    OMG this fic is awesome!! its so refreshingly different to the other fics that u read here!! & is totally creative!! i cna't believe how u come up with the way for them 2 get through all the 7 sins!! by far i like sloth cos i can't believe how u got them out over sumthing so simple! & thats the best thing about this fic that the way out is so simple that u wonder how u didn't come 2 think of it in the first place!! lol but i can't wait for the next add of greed!! but my money is on lust!! lol i sooo can't wiat for that 1!!! lol till then i'll be waiting!!! xoxo
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  • From kazfeist on January 22, 2008
    A very interesting concept, to be sure. I can understand why you felt that the last chapter just hadn't reached its target. I think your idea of having them not only meet, but conquer the seven deadly sins is a great idea. I think a few more sentences about wanting to put off climbing the steps would have done the trick, in the last chapter. Hermione's a smart girl...she'll figure it out, soon. And Draco will go along, not wanting to be outsmarted, yet again, by a Muggleborn. You could even have him be stronger against some of the sins than she is...helping her out of jams in that way. Have you decided yet who Red-Eyes is? Good luck, and looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From AlexisRose on January 22, 2008
    I think you have a really good story here! This is a very interesting idea, and I just love original plots and such! I hope you update soon!
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  • From jessysgirl on January 21, 2008
    Update, update, update!! Oh, I'm so shamelessly demanding...
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  • From bananasforyou on January 20, 2008
    thumbs up to that chap!
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  • From ANON - shadow walker on January 20, 2008
    omg. i can not wait for you to finish the next chapters! i love the 7 sins, they are so cool!
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  • From ocard on January 16, 2008
    interesting :) and i think you did a really good job with how the two characters would react. of course hermione would be the one to notice something is wrong, and how draco doesnt listen but ends up getting them out of the mess... brilliant ^_^ im totally going to follow this story to the end!

    and fyi, cuz this story is based of the seven sins, i researched the movie 'seven' online (it stars brad pitt) and oh my god that shit is disgusting! i dont know if you've seen the movie, but if ever you have time to rent or see it, do... it's really twisted, bit really good...

    xoxoxoxoxo
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  • From ocard on January 15, 2008
    wow this is such as interesting story ^_^
    how did you even think of writing a story using the seven deadly sins... that's so original! hmm... i wander what will happen when they get to lust? ... *giggles*
    it was a great first chapter and i cant wait for more :)

    xoxoxoxo
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  • From bananasforyou on January 15, 2008
    it was great more please!
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  • From LeftInnocenceBehind on January 15, 2008
    Oh, yes, do please continue :-D Seven deadly sins are always a wonderful undertone to any story analyzation haha ^_^

    no, no sarcasm all props, and looking forward to gluttony (mmm....food...)
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