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Reviews for Temptations

By : Nikkilicious
  • From LydiaLydia on November 16, 2011
    Impressive job! Your story is quite unique, and yet never OC. The writing is flawless too. I loved it! Looking forward to reading your other works here :)
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  • From becka8199 on April 30, 2010
    Well that was definately different. I plan on reading more of ur stories. Hope they are as good as this one. It kind of reminded me of the movie that just came out "lovely bones" but the only difference was tht the girl in that movie was dead and draco and hermione weren't. and she didn't have to go through the 7 deadly sins to escape, she just had to help her dad find her killer. Kudos on a great story.
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  • From ANON - Martha on December 29, 2009
    That story was amazing. Pity about someone plagarising it thouh. Can't wait for the sequel to be posted.
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  • From ExperimentalMe on March 02, 2009
    Wonderful story and brilliantly written. Thanks for sharing it.
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  • From callistianstar on December 26, 2008
    (callistianstar) This was glorious! I really enjoyed reading as they worked things out, and how your wrote their different emotions. Seeing the school change, and seeing their new relationship after returning was awesome. I think Gluttony was my favorite for the two of them out of all the alternate universes. That they had to destroy what they wanted so badly...this was written well. I look forward to the sequel.
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  • From DracosDuchess on August 04, 2008
    Awesome story! This is by far one of the most clever plots I've ever read!! You are an amazing writer. I only hope that when I start getting my fics up here they'll be half as good as yours! I can't wait for the sequel! More Draco and Hermione!!! (The best ship ever!)
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  • From KittyNeko on July 09, 2008
    Wow. Just wow. I really liked this story - it was very original and well played out. You did a GREAT job!
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  • From princesspeach on July 04, 2008
    I just read this whole thing start to finish in the past 3 days, and I thought you did such a good job with it! It kept my attention the whole time and the idea is so original! I hope you write more stories like this in the future and I will definitely be looking out for the sequel! Thanks for such a wonderful read! :)
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  • From mlui on July 03, 2008
    I loved this story! It was a very interesting twist on the seven sins. Will there be a sequel in the future? =)
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  • From ANON - Ginzo on June 09, 2008
    U no u did a pretty gud job on writing this story. hats off to u. but u shudnt leave the readers hanging like they are with the ending. Its a pretty good ending but u should come up with a sequel for this story. Mayb it can be bout wat happenns b/w DM/HG and wat they do for the war. something along the lines. u get the idea rite? Anyways congratz on a job well done!
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  • From ANON - Amaya on May 30, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From StarKneazle on May 30, 2008
    See? I knew you'd come around and give us what we wanted!
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  • From ANON - Aaronlisa on May 29, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story and although a sequel would be great, I think the ending was really well done.
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  • From ANON - Tina on May 28, 2008
    I love this story and if you end it here I will love it just the same. I deeply desire for you to continue on with the many adventure that could stem from this story. Sheer brilliance my dear.
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  • From ANON - amaya on May 28, 2008
    loved the ending but if you could i would really love to read a sequel. You did seem to answer all the questions in the story itself but then you have the questions that we want anwered. like will they get toghether and if they do (they better) how will it happen. i think that if you did write a sequel that it will turn out great just like 'Temtations' did. you are such a great writter and i can't wait to read more stories from you (if it's the sequel for this one it would make it an even better read).
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