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Reviews for Lucius Hidden Son

By : roseline
  • From foxeechik on October 24, 2008
    keep goin! i like it! can u e-mail me wen u next update if poss? my e-mail address is kissagram_22@hotmail.com
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  • From jessirose85 on October 18, 2008
    Hey,

    This is a great story!! It is the first Lucius as Harry's father fiction!!

    Question: Will Hermione paired with anyone in this fic?? Will there be any relationships for Harry, Draco or Severus or is this just a father/son fiction??

    thanks

    Jessie
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  • From angelnomiko on October 12, 2008
    yeah mione is were she should be now ans harry and mione dont have to hide .. but how will ron ans pasny take it ..please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From kawaiiyashie on October 03, 2008
    nice chapter. well me am going to go home i have no reason to be at school any more i've read all fanfiction updates. well i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From kawaiiyashie on September 19, 2008
    oh wow this is a wonderful story its awsome! really i never thought of having Harry as Draco's brother mmm ideas well thats my review please do send me an e-mail when you update please.
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  • From angelnomiko on September 15, 2008
    wow i love it .. please please please update soon .. i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Astranith on September 14, 2008
    more more greedy for more Mwhahahahahaaaaaa >:)
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  • From juicycherry on September 13, 2008
    A Friendly Reminder

    Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.

    Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you
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  • From Astranith on August 22, 2008
    I realy like the story Keep writing more. It's awsome.
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  • From Ithilwen on August 05, 2008
    This is a good story.. Has a nice idea behind it.. But it would be much better if the grammar errors would be corrected.
    Since it's a bit hard to understand at times.. Because the words do not suit the rest of the senctense.

    If you need a beta reader, I can do it for you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2008
    I adore harry being lucius' son fics BUT

    You really really need a beta or to look over your sentences because most of them are soo bad that i cant read this story anymore because im tired of trying to translate and guess when you skip words or use just the wrong word in general. Narcissa is a girl and one time you refered to her as a him. Good Luck
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  • From pittwitch on June 27, 2008
    I think you might get a few more readers/reviewers if you would correct the title: Lucius' Hidden Son. I know a lot of people won't read something with a title spelled wrong, etc.

    Keep writing,
    Pitt
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  • From FinnTara on June 24, 2008
    I really like the plot. I've read a couple of Snape as Harry's dad stories and I'm surprised how well the Lucius as dad plot works.

    I think you'd get a lot more readers and loads of reviews if you'd find yourself a beta-reader, someone to check the grammar and spelling. The story (by the way, the title is spelled wrong) is quite hard to read.

    I wish in no way to discourage you to continue, but you'll need some help with the language.
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  • From Makovaso on June 12, 2008
    please update soon
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  • From Makovaso on June 11, 2008
    Please update soon.
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