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Reviews for Lucius Hidden Son

By : roseline
  • From on May 08, 2008
    I like the story
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  • From bumblebee on March 15, 2008
    this story is nice, but it's very hard to read
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  • From Slytherdor on March 07, 2008
    On a whole, I like this fic. But This chapter was confusing. Sentences ran in to each other and didn't make sense.
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  • From dino1 on March 03, 2008
    I wonder if Severus is Harry's godfather along with dracos. Can't wait till next update!
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  • From Madhater on February 23, 2008
    oh man i love this story i look forward to seeing the next chapter soon ^_^
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  • From alma on February 22, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From Madhater on February 08, 2008
    oh i love it it looks very interesting i look forward to seeing how this turns out. one question, how did Lucius play James in school? just wondering. ^_^
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  • From alma on February 01, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From on January 26, 2008
    like it
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  • From masterpenguin on January 25, 2008
    hi, I've been following your story and i like the idea but you do really need a beta.
    I'm willing to do that if you have not found anyone else. i can read, write, speak basic french so that may help. email me if you want at master_penguin82@yahoo.com.au with any chapters you want edited.
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  • From dianahuntresss on January 23, 2008
    I believe you have a good story going and your translator should be complimented as I know its not an easy task, but you should probably try and get an English speaking beta-reader to help finish smoothing out the edges as you've quite a few spots that are very choppy or wrong words were used. The english language is a pain in the butt I know so what you've done so far is very good. Please don't be discouraged.

    I kept reading even though at times I had a hard time figuring out what you were saying but I did and do enjoy the story so keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for your next update.

    Just an FYI -Director should be Headmaster
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  • From dino1 on January 21, 2008
    Your story concept is really interesting.
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  • From Jilliane on January 21, 2008
    I wish that you would have put in your summary that this was a translation of "Le fils cache de Lucius" and it would have caught my attention sooner! As it is, I'm happy to see that you've found someone to translate for you, and while I appreciate Tina's efforts, it is a little difficult to read. However, I can tell from the translation that the original story as written in French is well written, and I'm going to keep reading to see where you go with this. I wish my French skills were better, so that I could either read it in the original language, or help to translate. I know how difficult it can be to get the proper mood and nuance across when translating, having spent many years teaching English in Japan , so I really do appreciate the effort to translate this story to English. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on January 20, 2008
    ...i like...and cant wait to read more.
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