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By : eyesuhkattspeleeng
  • From VictoriaSparrow on February 17, 2008
    It's kind of funny that you added in the bit about the pensieve. I had a feeling Snape would do something of the like instead of coming right out and telling her. As for the marriage... It could go either way. If I were writing it, I'd probably postpone it for awhile but definitely have it there. Another great chapter!
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on February 17, 2008
    *Agrees with Barbie Malfoy*

    Updates keep getting better and better, and as played out as I sound, can't wait for the next!
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  • From BarbieMalfoy on February 17, 2008
    Poor Evelyn , having to be a slut for Malfoy, hope Snpe finds them soon!!! XDD
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on February 16, 2008
    Loved the last chapter, can't wait for the next update =)
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  • From BarbieMalfoy on February 09, 2008
    How sad that proff Sane obliviate her memory... hawever she is pregnant, and sme how Snape will know it in the end some day sooner or later.
    Please update soon, love to know the end. XXXDDD
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on February 09, 2008
    Only two reviews? I find that hard to believe... I love this story! Can't wait for the next update =)
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  • From ApollinaV on January 20, 2008
    I think you really nailed Snape's mindset. The internal dialogue/discourse seems to be so spot on with his character. What I really like is that I can't tell where this is going, if it's going to be a simple story line or something more complex as evidenced by the attempted suicide at the begining. And I don't care either way because it's written so well. Good on you.
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  • From auntbecky on January 20, 2008
    If this is your first story, I can't wait to read more.
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