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  • From ANON - MalfoysBitch on February 18, 2009
    Definately worth the wait!!! :-)
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  • From AlabasterPrincess on February 02, 2009
    Beautiful. The Epilogue brought tears to my eyes. Well worth the wait, having followed you here from FF.net.
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  • From bubblybabs on January 30, 2009
    Oh boy, brought tears to my eyes, this story did... Very well written! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - di on January 30, 2009
    At first you say that the girl is having sex with parkinson's father but at the end of this chapter she is a virgin, the continuity error is rather jarring.
    Good sex scene anyway.
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  • From PensievePerson on October 10, 2008
    Thanks for writing I just finished Part One. I must say it is a little sad how little compassion Snape holds for Evelyn. I don't think she's just a whore. Perhaps I don't understand...I liked how she does act realistically like someone does when their young and was sexually abused. Evelyn is smart and manipulative, yet an idea would have been good if Snape had tried to make her more submissive. Maybe spanking? Doubt it'd work on her. I liked how he shagged her before Draco walked in. Good introspective writin. You get into both characters minds. Even if it was still primarily Snapes POV.
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  • From PensievePerson on October 06, 2008
    Okay I read chapter one...so far really good...I hope they're relationship develops. She really has a lot of guts. I loved how she dared to touch him when asking for the higher grade! Have you read any of my stories? I hope you can R&R one...if not I'll still review this.
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  • From kittyperry on April 06, 2008
    Hello,
    Its great to see them back together again. I'm so annoyed with her for being with Draco, I can't understand her being that foolish, but, at least he's being nice at the moment. I still feel really glad she's back with Severus again.
    Best
    Kitty
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on March 17, 2008
    I really, really wish I hadn't read this chapter; the next wont be out soon enough! Great new addition, I can't wait to find out what happens with Severus and Evelyn (I don't think I worded that right, but you know what I mean).
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  • From LadydAllusion on March 05, 2008
    That was a wonderful chapter. I really loved the description of the ceremony, it was beautiful. I just hope she and Snape can make it through all of this. But then I supposed I just wont know until the next time you update...so be kind and update quickly.
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on March 05, 2008
    This was an excellent addition! Actually, in my opinion, the bit of Jealousy on Severus' part fit perfectly though that's not exactly how it came off to me. It doesn't seem to me, anyway that she was 'raped', after all Severus DID obliviate her, hence she has no memory of it; anyone would act that way in that situation and I don't think her reaction towards him should have been done any differently. This entire chapter fits perfectly considering the situation. Please do update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Caroline on March 05, 2008
    yes, this chapter was a little bit strange, she could have been more gratefull or at least more open-minded , since severus is her husband now. Sorry but I din
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  • From LadydAllusion on February 27, 2008
    That was an excellent chapter! Your ending, that last line was so perfect. It gave me chills.
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  • From VictoriaSparrow on February 22, 2008
    I wanted to review yesterday (When I read this) but haven't had the chance. Lol at the author's note/intermission it made me laugh. The actual chapter was great, as usual and I can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From prettypinkpony on February 21, 2008
    Ooooo I love this story. Also your 'authors note' was hilarious. Can't wait to find out what'll happen next. noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au is my email if you have the time to message me when you update. Nellie
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  • From BarbieMalfoy on February 21, 2008
    weddind,aren't they, sound interesting....XDDD
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