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Reviews for Visited Upon the Son

By : Sparkykiki
  • From ANON - monkey-mama on July 21, 2008
    Bribes work! This was great, can't wait for the wedding andhe honeymoon....
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  • From kazfeist on July 21, 2008
    Wonderful chapter, and I like that you've reunited Draco with the Blacks. Teddy could be Ring Bearer! :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 15, 2008
    I always like wedding scenes. I think one of the typos got by your betas, though....you meant 'quaking', not 'quacking' in the line: her body was quaking...Right? :D Other than that, I like Hermione's continued healing process. Very realistic.
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  • From ANON - Alle on July 14, 2008
    oh finally! lol i'm glad for draco... and for hermione. shes so sweet, and she dosent deserve to be tortured by her memories. the wedding picture was beautiful, and i continue to love the characters! great job!
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  • From jocat on July 14, 2008
    Just bite her back! Great chappie.
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  • From smmz79 on July 13, 2008
    LOVED this chap... I am so glad that hermione is overcoming her fears and flashbacks... what a great love scene in the beginning and hermione took the lead.. i think that shows that she trusts draco more and more... great wedding i loved the conversation between the boys poor lee with ginnys weird cravings... can not wait for the next chap great job....
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  • From kazfeist on July 05, 2008
    Well, I liked it....can't wait for the rest. :D
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  • From ANON - InBedWithSoviets on July 05, 2008
    First of all, great chapter, which goes without saying at this point... :)

    Secondly, I'm from NYC, but I have mainly Russian ancestry, with a little bit of Mexican, Romanian, and English. Yourself?
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  • From ANON - Alle on July 05, 2008
    Great job! I'm glad that hermione is getting better... it seems like she really took a bigger step in this chapter. I can't wait to hear about the wedding and maybe a little more action between them. Draco must be dying! -Alle
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 04, 2008
    Great update..its wonderful to see hermione slowly opening up to the intimate side of her relationship with draco. i think you are hadling that very well. draco is a wonderful man for understanding what she needs, even if it does get 'hard' for him on occasion. =) looking forward to more!!!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From smmz79 on July 04, 2008
    wow what a big step for them i loved this chap hell i love this story i can not wait to read about neville and lunas wedding i am sure that will be quite the event and i hope that hermione and draco are able to become closer... great job
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  • From smmz79 on July 04, 2008
    i am reading this whole story in one night and i must say that i really like it.... i love how you have draco in this story how the war has changed him and how having to decided a fate for his mother has made him view the world differently i love how understanding he is with hermione
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  • From jocat on July 04, 2008
    Thought I would give the grown up version a try! V sexy! Well to your betta and you this is a great story. Give your muse a tickle for me.
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  • From smmz79 on July 03, 2008
    ok so i have just jumped on the bandwagon of reading this story for some reason i missed it... i like this first chap so far... i think that you have captured the true emotion that would have gone along with harry and rons death.... i wonder though about the beginning flashback when she was held captive i wonder if you are going to go into more detail about that??? well i guess there is only one way to find out...
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  • From ANON - hellojenny on July 01, 2008
    Ha..just typed my whole review and it dissappeared, so excuse me if you get this twice. I really love your story, it is sweet and angsty and all those things that keep me reading, so congrats! I started it last night and read thru 25 chapters in one sitting..it really kept me going. I noticed a couple of errors (I think - you're the author, maybe I'm misinterepting) that aren't the silly grammer one's, which are easily ignored. First, you mention Percy twice in the 23rd (the wedding) chapter, but I'm pretty sure you killed him off in the first (right?), also you say that Hermione has been teaching her seventh years since their second year at Hogwarts, which would have her wrapping up her sixth year teaching. If the war was five years ago at the beginning of the story, and the job was offered to her after she tried to commit suicide one year after, she'd be starting her fourth year teaching at that point (the beginning of the narrative, I mean)- just cross reference to the age of the twins, since one year and nine months is not that far off. I hope you don't think I'm picking on you, I think you'd want to know-or maybe I missed something, and you can correct me-it happens. I really do love the story and can't wait for an update...good work, keep it up!
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