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Reviews for Visited Upon the Son

By : Sparkykiki
  • From ANON - InBedWithSoviets on June 30, 2008
    I'm in Spain right now, with limited internet access, so I have to make it brief-
    This chapter,as the rest of the story was, was fantastic. Thanks for the compliment about the pen name, lol
    Keep Writing, thank you for this great story,

    Regards,
    InBedWithSoviets
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  • From blondpierogi on June 29, 2008
    hi!!
    I was soo excited that I saw a new chapter up. I love this story!!!
    Keep up the awesome work!!! cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alle on June 28, 2008
    I just read this whole entire story for the first time (I can't believe I missed it!), and it is truly amazing. The plot is wonderful, the grammer is neat, and the characters are perfect. The whole marrige law idea was a little out of the blue, but then there wouldn't be a story. Great job, please update soon! -Alle
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  • From Bellakuuipo on June 20, 2008
    more please more this is a wonderful story :)
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  • From loverofthenight on June 17, 2008
    Haha, children in a wedding rarely works out, my cousins started fighting with each other in their brother's wedding too. Not a ton of action in this chapter, but I love this story and can't WAIT to read more H/D!! :)
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  • From kazfeist on June 17, 2008
    This was a lovely chapter, and an unusual choice for Ginny's second husband. Can't wait for more on Hermione and Draco, though. :D
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  • From ANON - InBedWithSoviets on June 13, 2008
    This was awesome, somehow I hadn't noticed the "review" button on aff, so I reviewed the last one on regular ff.net...

    Great story though, and very well written.
    Peace, and Keep writing,
    -IBWS

    p.s. The pen-name was originally the name of a band, because my then-girlfriend was the daughter of a famous russian. Once the band broke up, I kept it for writing b/c I thought it sounded good.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 13, 2008
    this story is moving along wonderfully. i like that you are giving hermione realisitc reactions to being intimate with draco because of her past. great job! Keep it up!!

    Lady B!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2008
    NOT BAD I really like this story but one thing bugs me,I cannot stand the name MIA that is not her name it is HERMIONE!!! Heck MIONE will be better!
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  • From kazfeist on June 13, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating....it would be neat to see that dress of Hermione's, or at least a website showing the picture. :D
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  • From monkeymama on June 10, 2008
    Been lurking and loving this story since it began. Would love to read more!
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  • From kazfeist on May 16, 2008
    Glad you updated, and I hope you have them come through this together, soon. I really feel for the two of them. :D
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  • From jessirose85 on May 08, 2008
    This is a great story..thanks for updating so soon xxxx
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  • From kazfeist on May 08, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating, and I hope you've got great ideas for the wedding ceremony. :D
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  • From blondpierogi on May 08, 2008
    aww this chapter was soo cute. will you put more wedding details in the story? I am wondering b/c i'm planning my own wedding, and i love reading and hearing about other peoples plans.
    Anyways, please keep up the awesome work. This story rocks!!!!
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