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Reviews for Visited Upon the Son

By : Sparkykiki
  • From ANON - lily xo on March 08, 2012
    fini! xD that was a vairy good story and i like it so maybe later when i have time i might chack out some more of your stuff or at least make a mental note to rember your penname and look out for it xo lily
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  • From ANON - lily xo on March 08, 2012
    hey again i love ze story its been good im upto lunas wedding and just to point out an error that always crops up with american writers it mum not mom!
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  • From ANON - lily xo on March 07, 2012
    heyya.. its moi again xD im back and ive read chapter two and i love it i think i will carry on reading it seems interesting and has potential i think ill review every few chapters and will probably finish this fic tonight :) well peace out lily xo
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  • From ANON - lily xo on March 07, 2012
    hey just thought i should say this is very good for a first fic though have only read the first chapter and well yeah i look forward to reading the rest lter when i get back from college
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  • From purefaith91 on March 08, 2011
    A wonderful story and an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on March 07, 2011
    So in the end it was the tempers and lack of self control that got Harry and Ron killed. And Luna got her due finally. Go Neville for telling her that Draco may not have left to get away from her. Excellent! p
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  • From purefaith91 on March 07, 2011
    Awww, poor Draco. I can just see him having his feelings crushed since he is so excited and she is not going to be nice about it. I hope that she tells him soon what her problem is. I don't understand her undying love of Ron as more than a friend though. Talk about ill suited. Bet the hat would not have put them together if he were still alive. And I cannot see him helping her with any emotional anything. Really getting good. p
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  • From purefaith91 on March 07, 2011
    How horrible to have to be reminded of the worst things to happen in your life on a daily basis. Makes you feel bad for both of them though since Draco had nothing to do with it so will not be able to overcome it. It would suck to grow up in Lucius' shadow under noral circumstances. Very interesting. p
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  • From ANON - Ms. M on September 14, 2009
    I am lovin' this story. I read the story on ff.com. I happy that draco & hermione was together. Great job! Are going to write more or draco & hermione?
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on September 10, 2009
    Love your story!! I really like reading about bad Draco going good (or rather, that he wasn't bad to begin with!).
    I know that you will probably not read this, as this story is an older one, but I just had to tell you!!
    Keep writing! You really have a talent for it!!
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  • From on October 29, 2008
    Hi! I'm enjoying it so far -- I think you've done a good job of avoiding the usual "marriage law" cliches. About Draco's name: I would guess it's probably more his mother's doing. The Black family has a tradition of celestial names. Sirius, Regulus, Cygnus, Arcturus, Alphard, Andromeda, Draco and Bellatrix are all the names of stars, constellations, and even a galaxy, and I suspect some of the other names of Black family members also have astronomical origins. And of course Draco's son Scorpius is another constellation ("Scorpio" is the name used in astrology). The few Malfoys we know about do have classical names (Abraxas is another classical reference, from Greek, although AFAIK it's not the name of anyone famous like Lucius and Draco), but the naming habits of the Black family are quite obvious. (Even before DH came out, I had speculated that RAB was Regulus Arcturus Black.)
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  • From saffron on August 08, 2008
    I love this story. It is one of my favourite Draco/Hermione fics.

    I just read the epilogue I have been busy trying to get back to writing my fics so I did not have the time to read the ending. Writer's block :P

    I am finally writing a review after reading the complete story.

    I must say I am beyond pleased how this story turned out. Everything about this story is amazing. Do did a wonderful job!

    I cannot wait for you to write another story.
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  • From ANON - MindaInk on July 30, 2008
    I LOVE IT! I've been waiting for the wonderful ending for soooo long. This is one of the best one's I've read and so full of experiences that others can relate to in their own lives. Sad that she was unable to have more children but that happens sometimes and I'm happy that you included that bit of real information. Excellent story! And please keep writing more stories. They don't have to be Draco/Hermione cause you have your readers enthralled I can say that with all honesty!
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  • From sherrithewriter on July 29, 2008
    I loved your story and thought you did an excellent job handling a sensitive topic -- rape. I was afraid she would not be able to get over that very horrific experience. I enjoyed seeing their relationship develop -- it was mature, thoughtful and romantic. Good job!
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  • From shelagh on July 29, 2008
    What an awesome job!!! I'm sorry to see it end. Execellent work I look forward to your next endeavor.
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