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Reviews for Pain of the Innocent

By : Emptyinside
  • From Jan on February 18, 2008
    Wow! Poor kid, having to go through hell and back at such an early age, I feel for him.

    I like this story very much. Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From voldemortsgrl on February 13, 2008
    This is really good so far. Update soon please.
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  • From on February 13, 2008
    It was a good start and everything
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  • From alma on February 13, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From Wendy on February 13, 2008
    Hmmm... I'd choose Dante. I've always liked that name after playing Devil May Cry.
    My favorite clip from that game series is that of him taunting a certain giant three headed dog called Cerebrus, here is the link if you want to see it on youtube ... ... ...
    http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=Igc9TvBv390&feature=related
    That my reason as to why I like that name. Otherwise I think you have got a good story there. Please continue.
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  • From alma on February 07, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 07, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 07, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 07, 2008
    good start.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on February 04, 2008
    Voldemort or Tom does come and save Harry right? I hope so. WHo the hell does that bitch think she is taking Harry like that. The nerve. I hope Tom kills her.
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  • From on February 03, 2008
    I vote for Dante.
    Another great chapter.
    I love how twisted Harry is.
    I can't wait to see what he does next.
    Update soon please.
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  • From on January 31, 2008
    Oh it's so hard to decide. I love Damain, Dante, and Alexander. Those are some of my favorite names. I vote for one of those.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on January 29, 2008
    More please.
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  • From CRaZymonKi on January 29, 2008
    I love stories that twist the books around, saying J.K.'s work wasn't completely accurate. I can't wait to see how your story turns out and what REALLY happened when Harry met Snape.
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  • From on January 27, 2008
    Heh. That was awesome. Vicious little guy isn't he? -giggles- He's absolutely darling. Voldemort would be so proud. I like the name Kira. I'm not to crazy bout Vince though. It reminds me of Vincent Crabbe, and he is so not cute. I'm not too crazy about the name Harry either tho. But I guess it's alright. Anyway, great chapter. Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next one.
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