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By : AndreaLorraine
  • From LadyBlueEyes on February 16, 2008
    fantastic update. i love the idea of a wizarding mafia! i hope harry doesn't go too ballistic, hopefully with hermione being there his confrontaion with lucius will not result in any lasting injuries on either side. kudos to you for a wonderful (informative) chapter.
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  • From Utopia on February 16, 2008
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    first things first: how do you get the tab to work when you upload? I can't tab my paragraphs and it drives me mad! Can you put up instructions in a later chapter explaining how? Please? Pretty Please?

    I think its a common thing among the fanfic writers that RW/HG would not work; it boggles the mind that JKR would pair the brightest witch of the age with someone who isn't the shiniest cauldron in the cupboard. Ron would drive her mad with his attitude and probably be intimidated by her intelligence! Hermione would need a bloke with a brain, and that is a rather short list. Though, it is a shame that his adultery was caught by Rita Skeeter, though perhaps it is for the best; Hermione could have ended up with goodness-knows-what disease after his amorous undertakings elsewhere! Ron should have had the guts to end it before going after a different woman.

    Ginny's reaction 'What has my brother done now' was priceless! And Harry's reasoning over his emotions was brilliant and kept perfectly in character!

    Lucius as the business man is hardly surprising - I presume they lost the Manor or are banned from living there for a while? Though, he would have to have an i-phone, and as they're exclusive to one network in the UK and with no competition from other companies they're rediculously expensive! I wonder when he got the hang of the internet, the computer, the TV... evidently LM is very adaptable to his situations.

    The kiss at the end - that has certainly given the public something to think about - though Rita will probably twist it into something so much worse!

    11/10!
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  • From mhaj78 on February 16, 2008
    Oh my gosh, this is pure GENIUS. I can't even imagine how much work and creativity you put into setting the absolutely perfect scene with exemplary supporting historical evidence--amazing!!!!! I've been waiting and waiting, checking every day for an update...I know it's only been a few days, but I miss this story so much. It's wonderful!
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  • From calaminehorn on February 15, 2008
    Ah ha! How marvelous! A Mafia subplot, I'm now that much more engrosed in the story for my ability to relate. I'm half Italian, from Sicily most pointedly, which if your familiar with Italy, is where the Mafia originated, back when it had to do with farming and produce. Of course, I'M not Mafia, but my father's half of the family is, my Nonno moved our strain of the family here to Canada on business. Something about transporting goods... totally innocent, I'm sure.

    ANYWAY! The wizarding mafia is a novel idea, and you've planted the seed of a plot in my own mind.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Lucius, having just recovered from his breakdown... only to be assaulted by Harry. Maybe Ginny will finish the letter and whatever juicy information it contains in time to hightail it over to the Malfoy residence and save him from her boyfriends wrath. One can hope, anyway.





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  • From chickaboo on February 15, 2008
    Uh-oh. Harry's pissed. Good thing Hermione's there....I think. Great update honey, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 15, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From dynonugget on February 14, 2008
    Just loved how intense Draco and Hermione's lovemaking was. Wow, you wrote that so amazingly well.

    The descent into Lucius's emotions was amazingly well written. So intense, so incredible. I just wanted to reach out and hold him. To see him crack like that was gripping, and so realistic.

    Your writing style is wonderful, and this chapter was well worth the read.


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  • From ANON - kilala on February 13, 2008
    I loved reading your story. Hope there are more chapters soon.
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  • From readingwoman777 on February 12, 2008
    Lush, positively lush. I love the way the relationships are developing. Thanks for Lucius backing off from Hermione, even if a bit regretfully, at Draco's request: I'm glad for his insight about his son. And HAH! I KNEW Narcissa had to come into the scene, and whew, what scenes. So, is her ring a decoy? And how did she know who to go after after the injuries to her menfolk? Maybe a tie-in to her theoretical fiance? And what about Emma? is she a red herring, or will she have a serious role to play in the tale? And how powerful, Lucius' breaking down, all the repressed emotions bursting forth, for him & Draco to see and deal with. You're doing a great job with this. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on February 11, 2008
    i like this no wait let me think......hold on.......no thats right i dont like this I FREAKIN LOVE THIS ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on February 11, 2008
    Please let him ruin Narcissa's next marriage. They belong together.
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  • From ANON - mekareami on February 11, 2008
    A most excellent story so far :) Good plot and the smut is not over the top. Thankyou very much for writing and I hope your RL allows you to continue soon.
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  • From luvhp on February 11, 2008
    Wow.
    Okay, first off, Love General Tso's, MMM yum! :)
    And nice follow up to lunch, dessert! Yeah! MOre Dramione action.
    But, wait, how could Lucius love her? noooo, sorry, your story :)
    Anyway, I only hope that he does his son well and stays away from her. Draco needs to tell his father how he feels about her.
    And Hermione really needs to step up and figure her feelings out as well.
    Unless they plan to be a happy trio, which I think either man will not agree to.
    Oh, and GO NARCISSA! Kick some wizard arse.
    LOVING IT!!
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  • From ANON - kymmy on February 11, 2008
    So, so happy to see an update. Can't wait for the next update! Loved that ending there..... go Narssica. Anyway Hermione meets up with her on the way? Talk about 2 women 'scorned' and it's not like Hr and Rita don't have their own issues (hehehe).
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 11, 2008
    I think that Lucius should end up with Ginny, even though he loves Hermione. I think Draco would give Hermione up if he knew that his father truly loved her. I hope that everyone talks about their feelings especially now that Kingsley has told Hermione that Lucius is Crucioing himself from pent up anger and other feelings. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
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