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Reviews for The Death Eater's Valentine

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From sherrithewriter on February 04, 2008
    Fun story!
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  • From DB1 on February 04, 2008
    awesome story i loved it. too bad there wasn't any hermione/severus/lucius together.

    *DB*
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on February 03, 2008
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - sma11t0wngir1 on February 03, 2008
    I cruise the site trying to find good stories and sometimes it's hard. But when I do, I keep coming back to it to see if it's updated. If i really love it, I bookmark it and I check it constantly. If by the end it turns out to have been fanstastic I keep it bookmarked so I can reread every once and a while. This story was one of the fanstastic ones. I couldn't stop reading, I was totally addicted. It was so good that I went to your page to look at other stories you've written (something I NEVER do). Once I got there I realized that every story that I've kept to reread, was written by you. I never noticed before. You are truely amazing and I can't wait for your next story. I know it'll be equally brilliant. I just thought I'd let you know that your very very talented. Please keep writing.

    sma11t0wngir1

    P.S I completly agree with your Lucius, Severus snadwhich idea. :)
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 03, 2008
    Chapter 13: Why do I find Lucius
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  • From wishywashy on February 03, 2008
    very sweet. i liked the ending. and severus' tomato viagara was too funny.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on February 03, 2008
    SG awesome job! I thought this was sweetest story. I can't wait to read another Lucius and Hermione story done in Indiana Jones story. You have my attention. Please write it soon.
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 03, 2008
    This was a wonderful story. Even though Severus and Lucius had problems dealing with Hermione's family, I am glad that she decided to be with Lucius forever.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on February 03, 2008
    this whole story was great. short and sweet! the traditional wizard offerings and severus' offer to make a virility potion for hermione's grandfather had me laughing. looking forward to more stories!!
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  • From Utopia on February 03, 2008
    Bottle of wine, clothes, dragon... yep, that'll do for me!!

    I loved how the 'little Norbet' burnt down the table! Where the heck are they going to keep it?! Though, it would make a cracking 'guard dog', wouldn't it - a thief wouldn't take on something that breathes fire! lol! I'm sure that Hagrid will give it a home (I can see it snuggled up in Fang's basket and watching the care of magical creatures lessons); or even Charlie in Romania! (Though, I suspect Charlie may have been the supplier in the first place!)

    I loved Hermione's gran - 'Great, how's viagra going to help my tomatoes?' ROFLMAO!!! I bet she thinks wizards have some strange gardening techniques!

    So they didn't move in together? Odd - but I guess Hermione needed some personal space once in a while, though, with a Manor like THAT space wouldn't really be a problem. She could give the flat to Snape - it would be better than Spinner's End for him! Or has Lucius already found tenants and is raking in the galleons from that?

    They're getting married. Awww. Are her family not going, I got the impression they weren't - or is it just that they won't know what to expect from it? I wonder how Harry and Ron took it? And did Hermione drop hints to how much *better* Lucius is in the sack, against a wall, in the shower, in the flowerbeds, on the dining table... (you get the picture! lol!). Flipping heck! What about Draco's reaction to all this, and to his new Mummy? LOL!

    So Snape is still part of this somewhere, but in more of a platonic sense? (though, could you *survive* the two of them at the same time?) I presume he's best man?

    Off the scale, luv! FANTASTIC!

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  • From Utopia on February 03, 2008
    With the absence of the light-speed, super-fast update I thought your hubby might be back and you were... well, enjoying the old ways with him! Not that everything was going wrong! So sorry to hear about the dog, I hope your kiddies are doing Ok with the loss, it isn't easy for them to understand. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: you are an incredibly strong woman, and I don't know how you have the immense strength to cope with your hubby being away and in such a perilous situation! Andy is only an hour-and-a-half away and perfectly safe, and we go nuts without each other! You're a credit to all things female! Everything will be alright soon!

    Right... what was I going to put in here before I read the A/N??? *scratches head*

    Oh yes! I remember! I loved how the revels weren't rape and torture; but they fought to please their captive and show off their sexual prowess! (Though, I'm slightly worried that Voldemort liked that sort of thing - seriously, if the reincarnation-potiony-thingy at the graveyard in GOF couldn't manage to create a nose - what chance did a penis and testicles have? (I think about these things - I think I'm a tad wierd!)

    So, why did Snape and Lucius sit the revels out? Was Lucius loyal to his wife and not prepared to play away (but where does that leave Sev?? Sev didn't have a love interest... *ponders*) Or was it that these two wizards knew their way around a woman's body without the need of a map and guide dog?? Would it be unfair of Voldie to put those two into the 'arena' as it would be a smidge demorilising to the other Death Eaters? As every woman knows, mock a man's ability in bed and bye-bye ego and confidence. (And I still maintain that falling asleep while with Andy was because I was ill - not because it wasn't good! *hangs head in shame*)

    anyway - enough about my embarrassing moments! 15/10!

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  • From LolaDiBlack on February 03, 2008
    OH DARLING!
    it was lovely
    I love it very very much
    Kudos for you
    well goodbye for now
    take lots of care

    Lola
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  • From on February 03, 2008
    Hehe - tomatoe plants!! Thanks so much for writing this story - have loved reading it! Really great work :)
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  • From luvlivsmile on February 03, 2008
    I wish I could give this story 1,000 stars!
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  • From ANON - ladyluv on February 03, 2008
    I loved the first chapter and how he finished "How will we pass the time" - big sexy Lucius - you can see his mind turning over the possibilities
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