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Reviews for The Death Eater's Valentine

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Damiana on January 31, 2008
    The way that you and LaBib write Lucius... wah. I could never resist that for very long. Certainly not more than a minute or so.


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  • From LaBibliographe on January 31, 2008
    Chapter 12: Poor Lucius; too devious himself to understand the simple apology Hermione wants. And I notice Severus isn
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on January 31, 2008
    just got home from work, firse thing i done was sat down to read this chapter!

    it was worth it!

    loved the last line "will you burn for me little one?"

    who wouldnt!

    loved the chapter it was brill as always, speak to you soon!

    xx
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  • From ANON - sarah thorn on January 31, 2008
    omg, i just read the death eaters valentine.. and it is one of the most wonderful, stimulating stories i've ever read.. i'm a scorpio and a very passionate person, so i totally get that you played up the emotions.. i've never read a story on here where i have laughed, cried, and felt such power.. keep the good work coming.. i'll be glad to read more..

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  • From Heidi191976 on January 31, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - willow on January 31, 2008
    This story is just to HOT! I love it!
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  • From Utopia on January 31, 2008
    I will gladly swap places with Hermione!!! I'll be tied up in his bed - but I'd rather tie him up!!

    Hermione is like me in so many ways, but especially in how she makes friends with males much easier. I had a couple of flop boyfriends and then fell head over everything else for the one - and I suspect that's what she's doing now!

    I don't like goats! Priceless! Though, the fact he was going to offer to heard them in the first place was quite sweet! He probably thinks its a strange muggle tradition of a courting man! Though in medieval times, it was tradition to hand over a cow to the girl's Father... LOL! Can you imagine Lucius turning up to the Granger's and presenting her Father with a longhorn cow and announcing he was going to court his daughter?! I wonder what ancient courting rituals happened with the wizards? Did an ancient wizard present the Father of his intended with a hippogriff? A unicorn? A threstral? (anything magical that wasn't equine based?! lol!) Oh - can you make some up and slip them in? Even if its just in conversation over a candlelit meal! PLEASEEEEEEEE? For me?

    I don't think these were the old ways Sev was talking about were what happened! I suspect what the dark wizard was suggesting was probably more nookie based, not lock her in and have a chat!

    Can we dress up Sev in a little towel around his bits, a pair of little wings, and a bow and arrow then call him cupid? lol!

    How many blokes have stood outside a shop changing room carrying his other half's handbag? My mum was in a top-notch shop (for once she was treating herself with something special) and my dad was stood outside the curtain, holding Mum's bag, and a personal shopper came up to him and tried to sell him a man-bag!! lol!


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  • From ANON - Tygerlily [Not Signed In] on January 31, 2008
    I just found this the other day and I was just hoping for an update when to my surprise there was one! I absolutely love this story. It's so nice to see someone keeping Lucius with that touch of darkness that makes him the character we all know and love while still allowing him to have a bit of a softer side when it comes to Hermione. I love LM/HG but sometimes Lucius magically becomes this soft teddy bear and I don't know, I think Hermione likes a bit of darkness to her men :P

    Anyway, I can't wait to see more. I'm really enjoying this one.
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  • From Tenar10r on January 31, 2008
    hee hee hee Wicked !
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  • From eileenmilner on January 31, 2008
    Still reading, still thoroughly enjoying. Best wishes. P.s. I would burn for Lucius, at the stake, in the Kitchen....you get the picture.
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  • From ANON - vintagejgc on January 31, 2008
    Severus really is the Devil's Advocate, isn't he?
    Very amusing chapter!
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  • From luvlivsmile on January 31, 2008
    No I could never resist Lucius. I don't even think I would have been able to resist as long as Hermione did. Great Chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on January 31, 2008
    Chap11/12 Thank you so much. No, I don't think I would be able to resist Lucius esp in the bedroom but kudos to Hermione for not backing down. Also, for some odd reason I feel slightly sorry for Severus as his comment to the waiter, saying "sadly no" to the comment about Hermione being his witch..but I my favorite pairing for Hermione is Lucius first. Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From goldentrio on January 30, 2008
    So very very cute. It's about time they spoke about everything out in the open, want they want from each other. This story keeps getting better and better with every chapter. It may very well be my favorite over "Sleepless Nights (which I absolutely adored)."
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  • From on January 30, 2008
    Wow!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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