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Reviews for The Death Eater's Valentine

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LaBibliographe on January 30, 2008
    Chapter 10: Double the pleasure, double the fun. It
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  • From Delfin on January 30, 2008
    owwww R, dont leave it there!!! xD

    update!
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on January 29, 2008
    Chapter 10: Once again you have outdone yourself. This was soo much fun to read, and I could just imagine how surprised Severus was when she chained him up as well. Kudos to Hermione for giving these naughty wizards a taste of their own,, submissives always turn out to be the best masters. I feel a little sorry for Lucius but he got exactly what he deserves however, Hermione was still the one to pay through her tears for him and a love that could have been. I am dying to know where you are going to go next with this. Till next time -- K
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  • From goldentrio on January 29, 2008
    Incredible! I can't believe Lucius and Severus planned this out, so very slytherin of them. lol. But still unexpected. At least Hermione had her revenge but she still seems hurt. :( Lucius better make it up to her! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 29, 2008
    This was a great chapter yet sad at the end. I hope that Lucius can try and get Hermione back and really apologize to her for the way he treated her. Hopefully Severus can help her to see that Lucius does truly love her. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From chickaboo on January 29, 2008
    Oh no. Lucius pushed too far. So what's he gonna do now to win her back? Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From on January 29, 2008
    Yeah for powerful Hermione! I absolutely loved this chapter! Now, let's see if Lucius will grovel & pour on the charm... Can't wait!
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  • From luvlivsmile on January 29, 2008
    Wow this story is great! I always love when Lucius is put in his place. GREAT JOB!!!
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  • From Shalengreh on January 29, 2008
    he better get his ass in gear and get her back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    Tears stung her eyes as he held her close, stroking his hands over her back slowly.


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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    Hmmm, I'll put aside my jealousy for a moment... though, if Andy grew his hair and took off his specks he could pass for a young Snape, he does have a... (how can I say this nicely?) prominent nose... I might just encourage that... *muhahahahaha*

    The Death Eater Robes were always something that fascinated me, I see it being a bit like my old school uniform: you had to all wear the same, but there were three different price options, your uniform could range from about
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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    THAT'S IT!
    I am so utterly, completely, totally, well-and-truly jealous of Hermione that I might be ill! He's drop-dead-blooming-gorgeous; he buys roses, cards, chocolates, pretty dresses with matching shoes and lacy underwear... I have to remind my other half of my bra size, dress size, shoe size every Xmas and Birthday!! Why can't I have one like Lucius?!!

    Why!
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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    I was jealous before... I'm flipping Slytherin Green with envy now!! Care to write in a 5' brunette character?? for me?? PLEEEEEEEEEEASE?

    What can I say? Really, is there a comment for that caliber of QUALITY??!
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  • From Tenar10r on January 29, 2008
    OMG! What an ending to CH 10!!! *faint*
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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    Utterly Jealous of Hermione.
    Completely envious.

    Mmm... isn't it an interesting thought that you could be sat in potions fantasising over Snape and him know all about it - the images he must have got in his head over the years! Mmmm... I could swap the blonde for that!

    The smut was quite sweet really, Lucius is initiating her slowly, but he warned her she was playing with a man... and Man-Oh-Man does that normally involve some powerful smut in your writing!
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