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Reviews for The Death Eater's Valentine

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    HARRY! yuck. They're like siblings! *icky thoughts, icky thoughts*

    I tell you what, if she doesn't want to play with the man, I will gladly take the task to hand for her... gladly, willingly... I'll beg, I'll plead... let me have hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim!


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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
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    In my random rambles through HP philosophy, which I have from time to time, I have wondered if Voldemort had a you-know-whatsit after he was 're-formed' at the graveyard... I mean, the spell couldn't manage a nose, I doubt it could manage boy-bits-and-pieces!! LOL! I bet he liked to watch because he couldn't participate! *head, gutter*

    A Death Eater Pleasure dungeon, lovely... where is it? Do you sell tickets? ~And is a certain long-haired-blonde available for hire?

    So Severus isn't dead (hurrah!), alive, kicking and kinky as ever! (Hurrah!)



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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    1

    Lucius needs the wizarding equivalent of a Filofax, he'd remember his appointments then! He's probably forgetful after inhaling all the fumes from his haircare products! lol.

    I loved how Hermione still calls Harry and Ron 'The Boys' and that Harry sent her chocolate - though was probably reminded by Ginny to do so.

    Lucius is an arse man in this one then, I always see him as a leg man, personally. Though the conversation was quite amusing, I had one similar with my other half recently! lol.

    Short!! I'll have you know that 5' tall is the way to go! And I do believe the word Lucius is looking for is PETITE! And if I could reach I'd slap him for the miniature comments!

    The buzzer was a bit short wasn't it! It didn't give anyone who's lost track of time long to escape the building, though Hermione's reason for why was quite amusing.

    Oh, what will they do? (but as this is AFF, I have three guesses... and Scrabble isn't one of them.)

    Nice Start!
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  • From Utopia on January 29, 2008
    Oi! Missus! When were you going to tell me this was posted?!

    You sneaky Slytherin!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on January 29, 2008
    :O

    oh no!

    bad lucius!

    even badder sev!

    go hermione for not standing for it!

    brilliant chapter!
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  • From KraeHi on January 29, 2008
    OMFG that is soooooo delicious! Hmm me thinks a little friendly double play??? you write such yummy stories!

    Much love

    Anya
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 29, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione is careful while playing with the two men, so that she doesn't get hurt later. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on January 29, 2008
    Smut away dear author! I love a sneaky Slytherin and you're giving me two! Snape is deliciously manipulative here, and Hermione is falling into her role quite well. Thanks for sharing! Pitt
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  • From ANON - Lissa on January 29, 2008
    How short sighted of me. It's late, and some how I missed all the chapters after six, luckily I breezed through the reviews and caught on to my mistake.

    Both wizards, both interested, both rivals, AND still it manages to resemble a threesome!

    Oh take your time, honey, I am thouroughly enjoying this, and every time Severus becomes more tempted, and Lucius more jealous, my heart gives a little jump.

    Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go wake up my boyfriend. I think he'll forgive me. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From curikitten on January 29, 2008
    See, I'm torn, because the Lumionus!smut fan in me really just wants to see a ton of hot action, but the literary critic in me is fascinated with the power dynamics and the characters' motivations. I mean, why is Severus taunting Lucius like this? It's not wise, and you'd think he'd realize that. And what exactly is he getting out of using Hermione to manipulate Lucius? And, okay, so this whole experience will probably have taught Lucius to respect Hermione, that she's not a toy to be manipulated, and make him that much more possessive of her, but she's treading a fine line, because we all know that when Malfoys pout, they're inclined to cut off their noses--or, well, their other protruding features--to spite their faces.

    And she obviously wants to keep Lucius. She'd be completely off her nut if she didn't. The rest of us do.
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  • From ANON - Lissa on January 29, 2008
    Hmm... it seems Lucius and Hermione think differently of their night together. For once, the woman is less attatched than the man. I love those sort of tense situations, something about being pursued...

    Is this heading towards a threesome? Or is Severus going to become a player in a love triangle? Rival's... even more appealing that the chase...

    Anyway! Lovely story, I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on January 29, 2008
    Chap 9 - dear, dear writer,or should I call you Mistress Snape-Goddess --- you have outdone yourself with this chapter, it appears that you may have done some research in this dept and I can say you are dead on with your writing. I can feel the heat coming off my laptop with your story and have to tell you once and for all,,,you never have to beg us to keep up with your stories, they are like a drug, much to good to stop reading... My, my -- I think I like a dom-Hermione. Always knew she had a darker side in her..leave it to Severus and Lucius to bring it out.. both naughtly wizards in their own right. Yum!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 28, 2008
    Chapter 9: You
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on January 28, 2008
    whew what a chapter! amazing.

    i loved the part where hermione confesses that lucius hasn't even taken her on a date, and say although muffeld that he hasn't had the chance, i would love to see that date, lol, if sev had anything to do with it.

    i love sevs naughtiness in this fic...go severus!

    cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From bluezauza on January 28, 2008
    WOOOOW!!!! MY ....That's my boy!!
    Amazing chapter! It took my breath away!! LOL Severus is a little devil, isn't he? eheh But Lucius deserves a little payback for humiliation and the way he decided to play with her !And Severus knows how to play those little games even better than his friend! And best of all it's going to be a lot of fun!HAHAHA
    And yes, he is temptation...they bought are!! And you write them better than anyone!

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