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Reviews for Dying To Love You

By : addyer13
  • From shadygrl on January 28, 2008
    Interesting premise -- you should definitely write more.
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  • From chicklet on January 27, 2008
    This is a really good start on an interesting story. I hope you continue with it.
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on January 27, 2008
    Im a bigggg fan of Fg/Hp fics...this is a new twist for me...Lv/Fg/Hp.
    Im reading...and liking...and than theres this big jump.
    Bang...theres calling each other 'love' and 'my .....'.
    I know fics need a bit of time to build and plot away...I like what you have started with and want it to continue.
    ...in saying all this...i like to see what you create in your next chapter for these lovey-dovey couples.
    Because I cant get enough of Fenrir... boy you got him all HOT in this...more please.
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  • From Spacious on January 26, 2008
    wow ok so i finished the last chapter you wrote
    and jeez it is amazing i think this fic might
    have just tied with my favorite fic Alphas!!!!
    That is a big step lol it is amazing and im
    anxious for the next fic so please hurry
    i can get a little impatient so please dont
    torcher me and make us wait to long please!
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  • From Spacious on January 26, 2008
    ok well so far i have only read the first chapter
    and i think it is pretty great for your first fic
    and i have a question do you mean like first fic
    ever or for just harry potter/fenrir
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good start, I love Fenrir/Harry pairings
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  • From kellar on January 26, 2008
    wow that is a really nice take on it i love that you made harry a real peerson with thoughts and feeling not a goodie goodie golden boy great story please keep it up and up date soon
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  • From Ladyroo88 on January 25, 2008
    Oh my goodness, I love it! Who tells Sev and Siri, harry is their son? Do they believe him? when will ferir, voldie, and harry get to together? Please post more!!!!!!!!
    Kisses
    Ladyroo
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  • From volleygirl on January 25, 2008
    Interesting concept, but you seem a little rushed to get everyone to the "happy ever after". Take a little time and let the plot build up. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 25, 2008
    Hee hee! They were fighting. Thanks, I got my wish. Anyways. This was a hell of a chapter! Let's see. Oh! Harry called Tom and Fenrir 'love'. I guess they've explored that whole mate thing a little bit? He knows he's creature, and maybe he knows about Tom and Fenrir being his mates? Maybe? Well, either way he wants to shag them/be shagged by them. After that kiss... Sweet! And then Sirius and Severus came to with their memories of that past restored. I'm guessing that by his reaction... Sirius, was the one who carried Harry? Er... Oh, what was his real name again? Ah! Alexander Harold Black. Well, at least he has a legit reason for using Harry. Kinda. If you bastardize his middle name. Whatev! I can't wait for the physical reunion between father, father, and son. I mean, Severus went immediately to Sirius and told him to use his nose to find his son, but neither went to Harry. Severus knows, but Sirius doesn't yet. I can't wait for more! ~dpa06~
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 25, 2008
    Okay, first: Fenny? No, that's just... Argh! That's just wrong! You can't give Fenrir Greyback, the most horrible werewolf in all of history a nickname. And especially not one like 'Fenny'! Okay, my rant is over.

    Wow! I loved this chapter! I love that it's Sirius and Severus that are his parents. Oh, who carried him? I think that made Severus' parting thought about the unknown magical creature thing all the better. Oh, I can't wait for that reunion. Please say there's a little fighting between them before they take the potion? Then they can jump each other. That would be amazing. I can't wait to see what you do with this! Harry being sub to Fenrir and Voldemort is going to be interesting though. ~dpa06~
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 25, 2008
    w00t! Creature Fic! I love Creature Fics, love it when Harry has a mate, love it when Harry has no idea about any of this. BUT, how does Voldemort know? Oh! My favourite part! Okay, there's actually two of them. 1) Harry telling them his little story and then asking for a cigarette be could bum. That was hilarious and totally unexpected! But I love it because, if you get all technical and Freud-ical, ina stressful or scary situation people (kids especially) tend to revert back to the basics: food, cold/hot, shower, bathroom, cigarette. Loved it! 2) You saying that Voldemort has an actual nose. I about spit my Pepsi all over my laptop, OMG. It's one of my favourite lines from a crack fic my friend wrote: "Why in the hell is Voldemort so pissed off anyways? What is his problem?!" Harry yelled. "Don't you know, Harry?" Hermione asked. "When he returned back in fourth year, he returned without a nose. It made him very pissy." "Yeah mate. You were there, and you didn't notice?" Ha ha ha ha! I loved it. Anyways, this was great. Well, not the news of Harry's medical scan, but the writing was great. ~dpa06~
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 25, 2008
    Oh, horrible cliffie! I hate cliffies as a reader. As a beta and a writer, I enjoy them. But since I'm a reader in this case, I hate them. Urgh! I love that Fenrir, Voldemort, and Severus were all completely WRONG!!!!! I love those reactions. My favourite part of this chapter is Severus' thoughts on telling Dumbledore about Harry's abuse. Dumbledore knew, Dumbledore told Severus he was wrong, Dumbledore told Severus Harry was treated like a king! What a lewzer! I hope Severus and Fenrir gang up on him at some point in the future. Now, what are these results that have Severus freaking out? ~dpa06~
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 25, 2008
    Hell of a beginning; it's got my interest for sure. Quick note: you should leave a blank line between each paragraph to make it easier to read. Anyways, returning to my review. I liked it. I like Fenrir being sent by Voldemort to give Harry these papers, whatever they are, and he's looking for a swaggering, I-own-this-place-so-back-the-eff-off guy... and instead he gets poor, injured Harry. Love it! Also, I love how you introduced Harry. A 'bloody, fucking wizard', was it? That's just great! Everyone introduces Harry, for the most part, and it tends to get boring and annoying since we all know who Harry is. Unless it's AU, and even then we still kinda know. Now I'm interested in the details of the plot and the story. ~dpa06~
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  • From alleycat88 on January 24, 2008
    Oh no the baby! :p Just kidding! I know who the baby is! So its like they lost like fifteen years of their life too!? How sad...I really like this story! Pleasse continue!
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