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Reviews for Lentesco

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jilliane on January 27, 2008

    Good old Harry, always ready to lend a helping hand, eh?

    Wonder if Poppy will start to wonder why Sev doesn't come to her anymore? And so, this must have been Dumbles' plan all along then? To get them together?

    More please!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on January 27, 2008
    Very intresting....I like where this is going...i'd love to get update on your stories
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  • From Madhater on January 27, 2008
    wow chapter six was sexy loved it. i really look forward to seeing the next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - js on January 27, 2008
    Just letting you know I'm reading your story and can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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  • From katecooley on January 26, 2008
    Oh, poor Severus. I just know this was that dirty shit Lucius' doing. Let's hope he's not going to freak too much when Harry offers to help (as we know he will.)

    This is good! I can't wait for an update!

    Oh, and poor Poppy, too. Can't imagine THAT was in the job description: "stocking up infirmary stores, keeping records straight for entire student body, occasionally may have to stroke off cranky Potions Master..."
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on January 26, 2008
    This is pretty interesting so far. I'd really like to see how this turns out.
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  • From Jilliane on January 26, 2008
    You're not sorry in the least! ARE you!?! Do you have a black leather corset and a whip stashed in your wardrobe? You MUST, because you get such evil satisfaction from torturing your readers!

    Alright....

    I, for one, like it that you go back and forth between past and present. It keeps the suspense and intrigue factor high, and even though I'm assuming they'll eventually meld together somehow, at this point it works well as to keeping everything straight (if that makes sense). At any rate, Severus' abuse at the hands of LecherousLucius makes it easy to understand why he's the curmudgeonly git we all know and love today.

    Yeah, and so now we know why Severus is up in the infirmary getting tossed off by Pomfrey every week, but what is Dumbledore whinging to McGonagall about?!? Trust you to leave it in the air, you evil woman! Update!!
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  • From mikaela717 on January 26, 2008
    If what worked?! OHHHH!! Update soon!! I am luuuuuuuurving this new (very intriguing!) story.
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  • From mikaela717 on January 26, 2008
    Oh, Lucius is such a nice boy, isn't he? :)
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    good.
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good.
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  • From alma on January 26, 2008
    Good start.
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  • From ANON - jin on January 26, 2008
    i don't like how every other hapter is a different story. just seperate them
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