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Reviews for Lentesco

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jilliane on June 10, 2009
    (A Complaint Chapter)

    At the risk of being stropped with the "sycophant" label, I do have to say, I admire your restraint. Honestly, what point is there to random bitchery? What point is there to even posting a review like that one, for a story that is several months old? Particularly one that has received 200+ positive reviews? Concrit is one thing, and I think that if we, as authors, are truly serious about our writing and want to produce quality work, it is welcomed, but there's nothing constructive about reviews like that. That was just a flame, and I have to say, that "reveiwer" must be sorely disappointed with a lot of stories on a lot of sites, since short chapters seem to be a major source of annoyance to him/her. As you said, this person obviously has no clue as to the story, and I would add that they also, obviously, have no concept of the phrase, "less is more". Sometimes shorter chapters make for more impact, is that so difficult to understand? I'm glad you didn't take that lying down, and before she can accuse, no, I didn't post this just to give you another review. I posted it because I felt you had a point, and that it was nicely made.

    Having said that, I enjoyed the "Bonus" chapter; I don't know how I missed that when it was posted, so actually, thanks for posting your reply to your "reviewer". I never would have seen the "Bonus" chapter if you hadn't!
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  • From freakenbree on November 13, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story. I think you have a way with words that allows you to describe things creating wonderfully delicious imagery :) I hope you keep up the writing.
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  • From sweetciel on June 05, 2008
    Great story! I really liked the whole 'time travel' element. And the baby at the end...Awwww ^_^
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  • From knowingdivine on June 02, 2008
    Oooo! Bonus hot sex....I am in love with your writing.Though I have to start Low Man Is Due...but I will!!
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  • From ANON - LiT on June 01, 2008
    oh that was a lovely ending so glad i looked to see what had updated today it was just what i needed only sad that it's the end. thanks for sharing
    ~LiT~
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  • From katecooley on June 01, 2008
    wooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo! You gotta love Bonus Smut!
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  • From Jilliane on June 01, 2008

    Thanks for the chronology, but...


    The bow, the butt plug, the baby!!!! I loved it, absolutely loved it! Everything I want in a happy ending Snarry! Hot smut, good humour, Snarky Sev, true love, and babies! Doesn't get any better than that! Love it!




    (Ahem.....now how about a sequel telling Lucius' side of the story? Heehee! Would pay money to hear how he'd explain that to Narcissa!!!)
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  • From ANON - Cath on May 12, 2008
    thanks for your story !
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  • From ANON - Evange on April 18, 2008
    I really loved this story, I must admit I didn't expect it to end the way it did. Severus should have found more to torture Lucius with. Harry was a little shit to do what he did. Lucius is and always will be the supreme bastard of the wizarding world. Please start your next story soon. I WILL keep reading whatever you write.
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  • From ANON - Evange on April 17, 2008
    You tale weaver you. Great story so far. I can't wait to get to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Evange on April 17, 2008
    I have read many chapters of the story now. I think it is a really good story, but sometimes I have trouble telling who you are talking about. I've read many stories on AFF and FF. I really like this one because you build the story so well. You give just enough in your chapters to want to get to the next one asap. Keep writing great stories like this one. Thanks
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  • From wendibird on April 16, 2008
    I liked it. So far I've read two of your stories and enjoyed them both, thanks. I will be reading the other two that are up soon, I look forward to it. W^^
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  • From wendibird on April 16, 2008
    I liked it. So far I've read two of your stories and enjoyed them both, thanks. I will be reading the other two that are up soon, I look forward to it. W^^
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  • From dominique1 on April 15, 2008
    it was a pleasure reading your story i also like the fact that you updated regularly
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  • From beth2438 on April 14, 2008
    I only just started reading this story recently and i just wanted to compliment you on a job well done.
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