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Reviews for Lentesco

By : SickPuppy
  • From chantalmalfoy on April 14, 2008
    Wow. I can't believe it's finally finished. :( The ending was great, especially the letter. I wish there had been some actual smut, but it was good without it. Brava!
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  • From on April 14, 2008
    Well, I loved it and will be reading the other story as soon as you put it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From mikaela717 on April 14, 2008
    Chapter 21 DOES make sense, in retrospect. Though I'm sure why Harry's world was "tilting dangerously about him"
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  • From mikaela717 on April 14, 2008
    Awwww sweeet
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  • From mikaela717 on April 14, 2008
    Very clever :)
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  • From knowingdivine on April 14, 2008
    So I have realised that I have read two of your stories, and loved them. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From Nikte on April 13, 2008
    CONGRATULATIONS ON THE ENDING OF THIS GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! (SHE DANCES AROUND THE COMPUTER THROWING FLOWERS) I really liked this story, and I loved Severus letter for Lucius, it was so tipical for him to return exactly what he got lol. I hope you post your new story soon, and please post me about it. LOVE, COOKIES AND KISSES!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - CT on April 13, 2008

    While I have to agree with Jilliane that I was looking forward to the smut, especially after denying us Harry/Aiden's POV over his first time, I loved the story. Lucius is a slimy bastard and it's good to see him be outwitted, for one, and take a shot for another. LOL...love to see how he manages to survive all the coming years with Narcissa, or better yet, how explains to his wife his sudden lack of "interest". Good job on this story, very enjoyable, and with an original concept.

    BTW....just because I don't often review doesn't mean I'm not reading, you know, but yeah, okay, I see what you and Jilliane are aleays whinging about. I'll try to be a better reviewer in the future. Oh, right...can't wait for the next story. The teaser was cruel, but brill.

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  • From ANON - jean on April 13, 2008
    SickPuppy-
    i love your stories but review very little. creative criticism if hard for me to convey as i am usually just happy others are brave enough to attempt to write stories and am even more-- estatic--when i find a talented writer (of which i think of you as one) whose every chapter i cannot wait to devoir.
    i will close this rather massive, well it is for me, revieew with a small part of an exchange after dinner from about 30 move years ago.
    we had just finished dinner one night when one of my father's friends dropped by and when they went in the room to talk we heard my dad'd friend ask why he hadn't told mother how good the dinner was? he would have been cooking the next night if he forgot to tell his wife how good the meal was wether it was good or not. the smile on me mother's face at my dad's reply will stay with me forever. my dad said "i don't have to tell her it was good. i ate it and didn't complain therefore it was good. had it been bad then i would have told her. i never have had to say anything bad 'bout her cooking or the house, for that metter. i can't complain."
    PS--BUT i guess i should say thank you more often. THANK YOU, i do so enjoy your creativity.
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  • From katecooley on April 13, 2008
    *SQUEE!* Lucky Harry! And Lucius should know better than to raise either man's ire or interest. Now he's screwed. Or rather, he isn't. *evil laugh*
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  • From ANON - Kay on April 13, 2008
    Just finished reading.
    I think the letter Luc will receive is just what he deserves ^^
    This way he gets to taste his own medicine and it must satisfy Severus to no end to write it.

    Afer reading the AN I'm just happy I got quite a lot of what you put in the story. It is always fun trying to find out whats coming next. :)

    And for your next story... I just can't wait for it. Hopefully it will not take too long... just Tuesday would be fine since it is my birthday... (OMG, I'm sure my eyes look like Dumbledore's - twinkling like crazy)
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  • From Jilliane on April 13, 2008

    Awwww! And I was so looking forward to the smut!! But, you're forgiven, dear, especially after the nice thank you for chapter 29. And you're welcome! Always glad to lend a helping hand. Just as you do for me.

    The brain numbing time turning issues aside, I really did like this story. Especially the end, cause you know how I love a happy ending, and hey, revenge is sweet, and I'm sure Severus would agree. I like it that you took the time to add Author's Notes, and NOT just because of the thank you in them. Even though we talk about our stories, we don't tell one another everything, and so I for one appreciate the time authors put into posting AN's, and sharing the process.

    Oh, AND, you wicked woman, teasing us all with the start of your next story!! And I've been waiting SO long for you to start this!! Write, damn you, write, and get it up and posted, or I swear....!!


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  • From soloflamelady on April 10, 2008
    oh that is really really sneaky I love it, I love the circle and that lucius will finally pay. The house elf was a great touch now if we can just get him free hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm Update soon and if I am not on your list please add me I would hate to miss an update thanks for the reading
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  • From chantalmalfoy on April 09, 2008
    Yay! :) Lucius gets what he deserves!!!! And now Sev can go give Harry what he deserves too! *grin*
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  • From Veracityrules on April 08, 2008
    Fuck yes! Go Snape, go Snape, go Snape!
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