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Reviews for Heartbroken

By : lilmisblack
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 29, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From vampgrl23 on November 05, 2008
    Hello, well i just wanted to let you know that i really like this story and i REALLY think that you should update it. Like soon?
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  • From tsunamiraven928 on July 26, 2008
    Oh, sweet Circe, this is an excellent story. You've done a wonderful job writing our lupine friend. I can actually feel his sorrow--and Tonks' as well, for she loves him and he's in so much pain. You've captured the angst without getting caught up in it. Keep up the great work!

    ~A.M.A~
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  • From 666devil on June 19, 2008
    excellent. thanks. It was a surprise!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 23, 2008
    this was brilliantly written, so heart breaking anf the twist at the end was genius.

    really really brilliant attemp doll, you should be proud!
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  • From Utopia on February 11, 2008
    You can die of a broken heart, and there is actually a medical term for it for coroners to use. My Grandfather gave up on life after my Gran died. So sad to see that Remus feels he has no hope left, Hermione would be so angry with him for giving up!

    10/10! The emotions were perfect, this wasn't a pleasure to read as it brought back a lot of unhappy memories for me; but I CANNOT deny the QUALITY of this piece!
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  • From ANON - sophie on February 01, 2008
    awww poor remus.

    you have nothing to be nervous about! that was tear-jerkingly brilliant!

    excellent work!
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  • From Carine on January 28, 2008
    Hi Lilmisblack,
    you certainly know haw to take your readers on an emotional rollercoaster.(and all in just one day!!)After the breathtaking chapter of"Saving your life"I twisted to this story and had to use up my whole stock of habkies.Thank you very much!!!(reader is grinning).LOL Sureves Epans
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  • From Lupinswolfie on January 28, 2008
    Perfect, priceless, and I absolutely love it (and you). Have I told you yet that my favorite part is how the wolf rejects her? I'm thinking a sequel---perhaps some miracle brings Hermione back BEFORE Remus dies, or they get together in the afterlife (which is what I picture happening). Okay, leave it here as you should, but know that I'm thinking all sorts of things and this story was incredible!
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  • From ANON - Christina on January 27, 2008
    Wow..that was amazing.. I look forward to seeing more of your work
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  • From ANON - Leah on January 26, 2008
    How dare you?! How dare you make me cry?! That was so sad and beautiful. You made it so heart piercing. Remus is written well, trying to hang onto part of Hermione, even if it wasn't really her.

    But can't you make it happy? Like, Hermione isn't really dead and she comes back to him? And he thinks it is Tonks at first and then she proves that it is really her? I like happy endings, damn it! *cries*

    Okay, so don't change the ending just cause of me and my oddness.

    It is really a great, sad story. Good job!
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