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Reviews for An Alchemical Discontent

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From MisstressNicole on March 24, 2008
    Miss Nikki 2008-03-24 id # 3001179062
    Too see if they all live...

    I don't see you killing them off. Well especially not Harry and Draco. And I can't see you bringing us along 16 chapters just to kill them. Redondant I know but my thoughts are jumbled and it's past 2 in the morning. I like where the story is taking Harry and Draco. And while I imagine they expected a trick/trap they didn't expect it from both sides. Daphane seems to be a force to be recokned with. I look forward to the next update.

    Again I thank you for writing and I apologize for not being a faithful reviewer even though I'm a faithful reader.

    Nikki
    MisstressNicole@hotmail.com

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  • From graballz on March 23, 2008
    OH MY GOD I love you!!! And I LOVE this story!!! Again, apologies for not reviewing every chapter, but I am a faithful reader (if you pay attention to hits). I was pleasantly surprised to find that Harry was searching out Daphne as an enemy (or a harm) to Draco after you said that he would think the relationship legit. I know how the story can change from what you conceive in your head to what comes out on paper (well, computer) so let me just say *HUGS TO YOUR MUSES* I cannot WAIT for Harry to face off with Daphne and just fuck that bitch up to high heaven and back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    As it is...of course I'm terrified for Draco!! At first, I thought the wards came down because Harry had been injured/killed in the battle with Cordelia, then I was suspicious as to whether it was Daphne...please, please, please Harry HAS to get there before she leaves and kill her!!!!

    I absolutely LOVE the exchanges between Harry and Draco! (I know I tell you that all the time, but it's true every time!) And I love the little hints about what's changed for Harry that was finally explained in this chapter.

    Let me just say...fuck Ginny and her stupid fear. She deserved what she got for being a weak bitch. Harry being passionate and jealous and lusting after Draco is MUCH more important than her stupid fear...but I know that there will inevitably be a fight about that. (Let me cast my vote for the outcome of "Harry finally tells Ginny to go fuck herself because she makes unreasonable demands for him to keep restraining himself")

    But yeah, Daphne and Ginny deserve to die...or maybe I'm just feeling kind of violent towards them...at any rate, whatever happens, I will still love you and your stories!!!
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  • From Yume111 on March 20, 2008
    So Harry
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  • From alleycat88 on March 19, 2008
    Hermione is so evil. What an excellent curse! Im excited to see how this next chapter will go...What will they do now that they have all the info they need...? Thanks for updating!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 19, 2008
    Will their plan work? Or cause more trouble for them? I sooo need chapter 16!!
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  • From Lunatichero on March 19, 2008
    I usually only review on Changing of the Guard...but I have a question....Has Hermione been playing chemist with Harry's potion...slowly diluting the dosage, weining him off of it so to speak. Its pretty far fetched...but I kinda just had a lightning bolt moment....
    Wow...its been a wierd day...
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From Yume111 on March 17, 2008
    Well, the plot development sounding very interesting.
    I
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 16, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 15!!! Sooo who did Theo do this for? Not tolerance. Then what is going on? Sooo need more!
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  • From alleycat88 on March 16, 2008
    Heehee...Hermione rules!
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  • From pendragon6644 on March 16, 2008
    Ah! Good job Hermione, I knew she could track down the perpetrator, and while I'm not shocked that it was Theodore, it does tell us that it came from Nott
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  • From Yume111 on March 15, 2008
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  • From ANON - Tac on March 14, 2008
    eep! I really want to know what happens next! Who was that girl and will Hermione catch Daphe? aaaah! That chapter went by so fast :(
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  • From pendragon6644 on March 13, 2008
    Could it be that Harry's magic has built up a resistance to the potion and that's why it doesn't seem to be working as it usually does? And Draco seems to take such pride in making his potions, will anything be resolved with his parents in this story? As always thanks for the new chapter and I patiently await your next.
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  • From TimeFlys on March 13, 2008
    Chapter 13: *Giggle* Good chapter. Looks like Harry might be becoming immune to his potion. Draco will be happy- unless Harry ends up doubling his doses. (That could be trouble!) Thanks for update! And thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding I had from last chapter.

    Can
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 13, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 14!!! Almost sounds like Harry is starting to build a tolerance to his potion. Daphne paid a visit. How wonderful!!! Did she get the information she seeked?
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