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Reviews for An Alchemical Discontent

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From thrnbrooke on March 12, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 13!!!
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  • From pendragon6644 on March 10, 2008
    Poor Draco, but at least he's started looking on the positive side of things. I have the greatest faith in Hermione
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  • From Yume111 on March 10, 2008
    Well, yes it
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  • From TimeFlys on March 10, 2008
    Chapter 12: Not my favorite chapter but defiantly necessary to move the plot along. Nice idea coming up with
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  • From Yume111 on March 08, 2008
    Why is Draco talking about dating Harry all of a sudden, right in the middle of a crisis? Is this his cry for help in a way, or rather his wish for being able to make a leap of faith and bring Harry into this and trust him? And since he wants a strong powerful Harry, is it also his wish to be protected and be taken care of? For things to be simple, at least for a while?
    He has always been guarded, felt the need to protect himself, so it must be both appealing and terrifying for him to trust someone else to take care of him.
    Harry of course is asking the impossible, he wants Draco to trust him, when he doesn
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 07, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 12!!!
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  • From Dezra on March 07, 2008
    OH PLEASE tell me that I don't have to read Daphne's torture scenes again. It kills me that She is making him do this!!!
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  • From pendragon6644 on March 07, 2008
    Well at least now Draco got a few things off his chest! Thanks for answering my question and for the new chapter!
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  • From Yume111 on March 07, 2008
    Cliffhanger?!

    They both seem to be so stuck in their problems, it feels so frustrating, with no way out, it looks at the moment, especially for Draco. As if his machinations were coming back to haunt him.
    I
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  • From softballace on March 05, 2008
    Keep going please post soon this is so good and I want more. The way that you allow the story to flow into itself and not stop it is exciting and it drags me in and wont let go.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 05, 2008
    OMG!!! Harry do something!!! I sooo need chapter 11!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on March 05, 2008
    No! They destroyed his shop! Im so angry...and then Harry's magic doing that to Ginny...wow. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From TimeFlys on March 04, 2008
    *Points finger* Look!! Chapter 11!!!^_^ Do I get a teaser now?! lol. I'm glad that Harry & Ginny are moving in the right direction I just hope it doesn't comeback to bite Harry. Good chapter & Thank You again for the constant updates.
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  • From pendragon6644 on March 04, 2008
    You know, I can't help but feel that one chapter Draco is gonna show up missing fingers and not having a voice. Not likely I know, but Daphnes so twisted. And isn't Draco in the shop that is now being torn down brick by brick? Poor guy can't catch a break! And I had a question about Harry's control over his magic. Does he actually have a problem now, or does he just think the still has one. I probably could go back and find out, but I think this way is faster. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work!
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  • From daynajones on March 04, 2008
    I really can't wait to see how Harry handles the Daphne situation. I do think he will need to be on the potion to help Draco get out of this one, the consequences could be dire otherwise. Draco will definitely have to realize that Harry can't see why he is upset, just as with so many men out there, you gotta hit them over the head with it, put a list on the refrigerator, and then take things into your own hands in the end anyway. Love this story, your plots are so different and thought provoking, will be watching for more! Sorry I haven't reviewed since the first time, this was bookmarked on my work laptop and not my personal one so you just got missed until the internet and my home laptop decided to have a falling out, and I am having to use the one for both fun and work.
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