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Reviews for An Alchemical Discontent

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From pendragon6644 on February 24, 2008
    Yes! It was just Umbridge! Well I can't say I'm sad to see her go, I do hope that what ever creatures got to her played with their food a little before they ate it, no less than she deserves. And poor Draco, what oh earth is Daphne doing to him! Hopefully Harry can "save" him before something awful happens. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the Desire potion plays out with the Ministry. I have lots of unanswered questions still.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2008
    when did they find out there was a side affect to Desire. I reread all the chapters and couldn't find that info. I think you might have skipped that part. if not tell me the chapter so i can read it again. upadate soon please thank you
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  • From alleycat88 on February 22, 2008
    OH SHIT! they're screwed! there has to be something up! Somebody killed somebody taking desire to make it look like desire ahd killed them! I know it!
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  • From TimeFlys on February 21, 2008
    O-Dear! A death by the 'desire potion'? This is going to get messie, isn't it? And we still need to fix the Daphne thing. Draco and Hermione work really well as a team. Hopefully we'll get to see them team up and go after Harry about his own potion. lol- now that will be a sight! On a side note: A few chapters ago Draco said that he preferred to be chased after. Do you seeing it going that way? Because right now it looks like Draco is going to have to be the one doing the chasing. I don't think Harry is ready for that- and honestly after the thing with Ginny, I think it might be better for him to relinquish control to someone else. (Or just for a while, anyway.)

    Either way I can't wait till the next chapter! And thank you for the prompt updates.
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  • From pendragon6644 on February 21, 2008
    Oh dear, who died! And how do they know it was from the Desire potion? I sense someone plotting against our heroes, but then again, that is kind of what this story is about... And I loved Draco and Hermione's argument, I can see that happening if the characters were ever forced to become somewhat friendly. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 21, 2008
    A death from Desire? Only if they were allergic to the ingredients and even then I don't believe it. I sooo need chapter 7!
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  • From ANON - Moyima on February 19, 2008
    Okay, Harry and Draco circling each other like this is driving me crazy!!! Fantastic chapters! I cant' wait to see two two of them zero in on each other! And Daphne-- ARGH!!!! Keep it up!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 19, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6! Well the lovely Ms Nott is paid off. But does Draco know how long he's going to be in service to Daphne?
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  • From alleycat88 on February 19, 2008
    Hmmm....Draco has many enemies...all of them want to see him fail and see Harry away from him. Well....I won't stand for it!! They shall never seperate them! Well that was an enlightening chapter. thankies!
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  • From pendragon6644 on February 18, 2008
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  • From alleycat88 on February 17, 2008
    I feel sorry for Ginny. I don't know what she was trying to do but it must have hurt her to see Harry stand up against her. But it makes me glad tht Harry will stand up for Draco. When will Harry find out about Daphne? Will Draco explain to him or leave him feeling guilty for intruding? Can't wait for more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 15, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5! Draco has no clue what Daphne did? Holy moly! Now that's brave!
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  • From graballz on February 13, 2008
    AUGH! Another GREAT chapter!!! GRRRRRRRR you tease me with the whole Draco/Daphne thing and then follow Harry instead of Draco!!!!

    *whimper* Less than sympathetic???? OH NO! Now I'm even more worried about Draco!!! *crosses fingers* Harry will come around...he won't leave Draco vulnerable and by himself...it'll all be okay...it'll work out...

    But I'm still on pins and needles waiting for it to!!!!!! Harry just misunderstands, right? Draco tries to play it off and salvage some pride and dignity in front of Harry and Harry gets the wrong idea...right? Once he realizes that Draco's doing it against his will, he'll think of some way to help him, right?!?!??!! *hope hope hope*

    LOL Another awesome chapter!!! And now I can't WAIT for Chapter 4!!!! I STILL WANT DETAILS ON DRACO/DAPHNE!!! I have to know EXACTLY what she's doing to my blonde baby so that I can kill her later!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 13, 2008
    Harry is cute...being all flrity with Draco! Will this end up being a threesome fic...like with Hermione included? I was just wondering...So....Diggory...he is certainly pushing it isnt he? Well now he knows not to mess with the....i guess NEW trio. Well done!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 13, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 4! Hermione showed him!!! Oh he didn't know what hit him!!! Almost feel sorry for ole Diggory!
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