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Reviews for An Alchemical Discontent

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Moyima on February 12, 2008
    I missed a chapter! But I'm caught up now. I love Harry's flirting. He's timid, yet he has a bold flare. It's a nice touch to his character. It so makes me gag that Draco has gone to Daphne. Harry's reaction when he finds out should be good. Diggory and Nott are still mysterious to me. They're after political power, but they're going about it in such an odd way-- makes me wonder if there isn't more too it. Maybe I'm just looking too far into it. Great chapter!
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  • From graballz on February 07, 2008
    AUGH!!!! YAY!!!! *HAPPY DANCE* I can't wait for the updates for this one!!! You are SO amazing!! I cannot WAIT for when Harry goes off the potion and Draco reassures him that his feelings of lust are FINE!!! (I hope that'll happen, anyway!)

    And I am positively ROLLING in the irony of Draco contacting Daphne Greengrass and essentially whoring himself out to her...and meanwhile, plotting a way for her to die horribly and painfully for hurting my blonde baby!!! I LOVE Draco-angst and torture, so I am awaiting the Daphne chapter on pins and needles!!! I want details!!!

    I love how you keep weaving all of the relatives of recognizable canon characters into the story, and I can't wait to see how it plays out!!! Yay for Hermione feeling better, and hopefully Draco will trust Harry enough to go to him when he needs comfort, especially if he's going back to Daphne and agreeing to something he's not comfortable with!!!

    (Or maybe Harry will swoop in and intervene!!! *hope* LOL) However you do it, I will love it, just because it's YOU who is writing it!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 04, 2008
    Lovely chapter. Harry and Draco really have to bare their souls to each other huh? Its good for them I think. Update soon please!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 03, 2008
    wow never expected draco with daphne for that.
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  • From ANON - Eric on February 03, 2008
    Hi.
    I've been following your story for quite sometime. Your mastery of words and story telling is truly astounding! It has a depth that not many stories carry nowadays. The characters are extremely real and the plot is delicious! I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 03, 2008
    Oh Daphne worries me! I sooo hope Draco knows what he's getting into. Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 02, 2008
    What is Draco going to do? Sooo need chapter 2! How is Daphne going to help?
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  • From ANON - Moyima on February 01, 2008
    Glad to see a new story from you! Great start!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on February 01, 2008
    This second installment is off to a great start. I hope to read more soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on January 31, 2008
    oh its soooo goood!
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  • From Ritinha on January 31, 2008
    Weee, part 2 begins! ^^ Poor Harry, now he must feel trully alone without Hermione with him all the time. I love when they and Draco get into those discussions!
    Well, I don't have much to say. Good luck with this fanfic, I'll be following it (like all your other fanfics!!
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  • From alleycat88 on January 31, 2008
    YAY! The Sequel! sounds good aready! I cant wait for the next update!
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