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Reviews for 52 Ways to Please Your Partner

By : emisloser
  • From kayemkay on February 25, 2008
    yay! i cant wait for more!
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  • From sway on February 25, 2008
    Hey, is there a new chapter on the way? I really do like the fresh idea to this story... Good stuff!
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  • From DarkLady on February 24, 2008
    I was pointed to your stories by a dear friend who has been singing your praises. I wish to extend an invitation to post your fiction at a Hermione Centric and Dramione site which I believe they would be well received. The main site is called Granger Enchanted and the url :- http://grangerenchanted.com/enchant and the Dramione site is called Pure Arrogance (both belong to the GE family) http://grangerenchanted.com/pure

    I only had to read your first two chapters to know I would be hooked and like your original idea and take on the characterisations of Draco and Hermione. Feel free to pop me an email with any questions you might have (mistessmalfoy@grangerenchanted.com) I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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  • From Safir84 on February 20, 2008
    Wow, I really must say that I'm pleasantly surprised by this fic of yours! The plot is quite amazing and so is the portrayal of both Hermione and Draco. And the fic itself is very well written, if one put past some minor spelling and grammar mistakes.

    Just a tip for future chapters though, maybe you should get a beta reader or at least re-read your chapters one more time before you post them, eh, cuz that would be great.

    Anyway, the fic is very sensual and erotic, but I can't wait to read about the actual smut, so bring it on, hehe! And I'd love to see some more banter between the pair as well, it'd be very much appreciated.

    Please update soon...
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  • From Phoenix2000 on February 18, 2008
    I think one of the cards pulled should be that they have to paint each other. Soft brushes...cool, silky, feeling paints...could be interesting!

    Anyway, I really like this story! I am assuming by your last A/N that Draco messed with the deck?
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  • From Tootsie on February 18, 2008
    You make me scream(again). The scence Hermione look at ....'s Draco, oh I'm just jealous her!.
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  • From moonwaves15 on February 17, 2008
    so around how many chapters will this have? I like the idea alot it is pretty unique.
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  • From ke3 on February 16, 2008
    I love this story & am looking forward to the next chapters! I'm sure you have had plenty of suggestions for cards, but I vote for Draco being blindfolded and his arms being tied.
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  • From izema on February 16, 2008
    i love u soooo much and ur wonderful fic even more ^_^ up date soon plez
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  • From nastygrl on February 16, 2008
    OMG! This story is awesome! The scenes are well written, there is flow and a natural feel of progression. The emotions and physicality are exciting and my heart races when I read each chapter, but NOW THIS! How could you give Draco this? I would have rather seen Hermione spank Draco, LOL. I hope Draco apologizes to Hermione and displays some sort of affection, or at least a softening of sorts, before he has to slap her ass! This is gonna be good! Thanks
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  • From myangeldraco on February 16, 2008
    I'm loving this story. Since you asked for reviewers opinions and suggestions I'll give mine. I would like to see more of the sexual chemistry and teasing, then when they both are aware that their feelings for each other are not just the game, one of them pulls out the finale card and they both feel gutted that it's over. They go to their seperate rooms then one goes into the other's room and they have slow passionate emotional sex!
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  • From JaynaM on February 16, 2008
    OMG!! SOOOO GOOD!! loved it can't wait for more!!

    Jayna
    xxx
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  • From darksecretxx on February 16, 2008
    interesting story lol
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  • From Utopia on February 16, 2008
    (ps. have they locked the door and put a silencing spell on the room? Not to mention a contraceptive potion?)

    Hmm... other requests for cards (and I can hardly believe I'm putting this in a review!):

    * That lovely blonde head between her thighs, licking and nibbling away at her - that's a very nice image! Something magical - they're from a magical sex shop after all - how about Hermione being levitated while Draco performs cunnilingus on her??

    * mutual masturbation - but in a sexual pose, rather than next to each other. Maybe Hermione on top of Draco riding his fingers while he thrusts up into her fist, chest to chest? They both need the release, they're so desperate for it!

    * Dressing up. Hermione in a little saucy French Maid's outfit - all the little frilly peticoats and no nickers flung over her back while being spanked with her duster (kinda wet towel flick, but with a duster). That's probably going to need quite a bit of transfiguration to turn the duvet into the outfit though - but they're the brightest witch and wizard in the school - they can manage that! lol!

    * Nipple clamps - both of them at some point, maybe even chained to each other by them so if one moves they stimulate both.

    One thing though - especially with their developing feelings, I think they'd be very disappointed and disheartened if their first love making (and the taking of Hermione's virginity) happened because of a game that they didn't want to play in the first place. Maybe just have the cards as foreplay and let them have sex once the game is over of their own free will and decision. I think Hermione would probably be a little depressed if her innocence was completely surrender due to a game.
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  • From Utopia on February 16, 2008
    I'd quite like to see Hermione blindfolded with Draco trailing roses over her body - the silky petals feel lovely!

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