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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Utopia on November 04, 2008
    Is she alright to portkey whilst pregnant?

    Oh, maybe the veil gave him one night for all his naughties! One night or a hundred - Azkaban is going to be terrifying!

    They let them have candles and matches?

    So the veil sent them back to 20 years after voldie fell?

    How did she get pregnant... Well, Lucius... when a witch and a wizard love each other very much, and have a little 3 by 3 cell, a rusty cot, a manky mattress and a LOT of creativity...

    I wonder if the veil decided that 4 years of weekly kinky sex in a prison cell all in one go was funny?

    It's MERLIN! Awww... I thought it was a girl.

    Oh... that's why they have candles. *giggle*
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  • From AndreaLorraine on November 04, 2008
    Ah, yes, glass houses and stone throwing and all that...I know...

    And you are most certainly not in kindergarten, my dear. You are at the very least in graduate school like me, writing dirty stories while in class. ;)

    I'm glad I surmised correctly that Lucius was being released. The Veil or should I say St. Merlin worked that out conveniently. It was worth the moments of angst. It's so nice that nothing has changed, and at the same time, everything has changed. I wonder what everyone else thinks, though. Mr. Merlin didn't fill them in on that.

    Looking forward to the rest of the detente! And of course cute babies and insatiable shagging and more sarcastic banter. :D
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  • From blueartemis on November 04, 2008
    Their memories are quite amusing. I'm glad they were able to manage so well together. So, Merlin is the Veil, or controls it? That was a nice twist.
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  • From angelprince on November 04, 2008
    A crumbled candle in her ass!!! Bloody hell Labib, you're too much.
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  • From chickaboo on November 04, 2008
    Yay!!!!! Lucius is a free man! I'm so happy!!
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  • From Citten on November 04, 2008
    Completely! thank you. :) i just get so immersed in the story that i hate it when you just stop! especially when i have to wait a WHOLE week for the update! :) well lucius is lucius he had to know what happened in the weekly visits (i just wish i could have seen too!). though i will agree with you on the fact that lucius is much better as an adult! (though i wonder would he not be very much like that as a seventh year too?) well it still would be a wonderful story if you wrote it! :) so what next---and i really hope that you have more planned then just an epliclog!!!!!!!!!!! :) i want to see at least a nice full chapter of the next nine months, the birth and then a) you can make things a lot longer and have some trouble b) a nice over view of their future. well those are my requests so am i waiting another week? --sigh-- i hope it is a quike week!
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  • From Damiana on November 04, 2008
    Yay!

    Hm. An interesting twist to the mystery of the Veil... Merlin was imprisonned beneath an enormous rock so I can buy the explanation. :)

    Nicely done. *declares LaBib redeemed*
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  • From voraciousreader on November 04, 2008
    Ok, you're forgiven. And I love the idea of Hermione spanking him with a book of sermons! LOL! Best use for them, really. Will the Academy questions be answered in the next chapter? That might make a good setting for a whole new story series, by the way. Hermione would make an excellent instructor for Lynx training in the Muggle world. So would Harry.
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  • From ANON - Rini on November 04, 2008
    Packratting; a disease with no cure :)

    They lost eight years of their lives?!?!? Whoa! That is massive; I know it
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 04, 2008
    Excellent. I think that is was great that Hermione found out that Lucius was set to be released from Azkaban and went to get him. At least they will be together from now on. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 04, 2008
    Free at last, free at last!

    St. Merlin? LOL!

    Very nice resolution in progress ... on to the baby?
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 04, 2008
    Great! Just great! The stupid Veil -- aaarrrggghh -- I know it makes sense but I don't like Lucius in Azkaban now. :(

    Two for one chapters for the way behind Witch!

    Woot!

    Quick to the next for resolution of the dilemma.
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  • From on November 04, 2008
    Hee! Brilliantly done. I'm a wee bit sad that we are nearing the end. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - godblessemohair on November 04, 2008
    LOL, nice twist. Love how its turning out :) Thanks for the update.
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  • From jenlaranja on November 04, 2008
    I think that after this chapter I simply love you!
    You're doing the most perfect job with the time change and everything. I bet it's really difficult but it's a wonderful story! And the veil is merlin, I never would have thought!
    Well, I'm looking forward to next chapter
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