Click Here!

Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From tambrathegreat on November 04, 2008
    Yay! St. Merlin it is. I want to see what changes have been effected on the Lynx. I love this story, and as it winds down, I know I'm going to miss it.

    I liked how the Veil gave them all the happy memories of Lucius' incarceration and bypassed the nasty Azkaban moments.


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mia on November 04, 2008
    Wow. The candle crumpling was just...hmm. Yes, wow. Okay then. I feel overly thrilled that you made the veil be so form of Merlin. I like that quite a lot. Thank you so very much for this wonderful and lighthearted chapter. It was definately called for after the events of the previous one. You are bloody marvelous as usual, and I thank you for sharing the love.

    ~Mia~
    Report Review

  • From Phreakdom on November 03, 2008
    Ch. 48
    Report Review

  • From ANON - winters on November 03, 2008
    I wasn't worried at all. I knew you wouldn't leave our Lucius in that nasty old cell for long. This is a wonderful story and I've enjoyed every minute of it. There's been humor, love, mystery and hot sex. Who could ask for more? Well, you obviously thought we deserved more because you also had a scary beginning, a new twist on time travel, Lucius' version of "turning over a new leaf", an original muggle villain, and Merlin as the Veil. Oh, and did I mention outstanding writing. Wow! You have definitely raised the bar. When you spoil us like this, we now expect regular treats. LOL
    Report Review

  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 03, 2008
    CH 48 :The candle crumbled in her butt!!! LMAO that was hilarious!!! I almost spit peanut butter cup on my laptop! So...Merlin eh? What is it that makes old wizards so meddlesome I wonder?


    On another front....did you see the premiere of Brotherhood? SO hot! I did a happy dance that Michael cheated on Kath but then nearly died when he told that chick to shut up and fuck LMAO was TOOOOOOOOOO funny....and Isaacs is tooooo hot.....wasnt bad on Entourage either, though his appearances were too short by far...


    Anyhow, yahoo! Hope Lucius didnt don the boxers....I need to reread and make sure I didnt miss it......


    Happy Writing!!!!!
    S_G
    Report Review

  • From dynonugget on November 03, 2008
    What a great chapter!

    I really am trying to catch up! Eek!

    I loved the line, "... but if you kiss me now, all that will be attacked is the inside of these pantaloons." Really had me laughing hard! Thanks!
    Report Review

  • From dynonugget on November 02, 2008
    Another stellar chapter! I love that Lucius thought of this for Hermione. He handled himself splendidly.
    Report Review

  • From voraciousreader on November 02, 2008
    I have a technical question for you: How detailed do you make your outlines? Mine tend to be pretty sketchy for the most part, but your writing is far more intricate than mine, so I was curious if the difference was technical as well as stylistic.
    Report Review

  • From dynonugget on November 02, 2008
    A great chapter! That scene with Hermione in the shop getting fitted was so amusing!
    Report Review

  • From TriniMinx on October 31, 2008
    OMFG! You did NOT just do that?!
    I read for two days and THAT was the cliffhanger?!
    Cruel, cruel, that was just cruel!
    He's back in Azkaban?! WTF?!
    And they're both crying?!

    Okay, rant is over.
    Update SOON, pleasssssssssse. :)
    Report Review

  • From TriniMinx on October 31, 2008
    So I just read the first chapter and I'm very, very interested in your story. Been avoiding school work and feeling sick lately, so I'm procrastinating with fanfic, and I can't wait to read the rest of your story.
    I see you have it listed as 47 chapters, wow! Will there be more? I take it the story is not completed as yet? Is it?
    Report Review

  • From sheherazade on October 30, 2008
    Oh NOOOOOOO, Lucius is in Azkaban! That was a truly shocking moment; I feel really upset for them, after they had worked everything out so neatly.

    I thought it was funny that Lucius was jealous of the Veil preferring Hermione, and I always wondered if he was worrying about Draco, so it makes a lot of sense that he'd want to go back. Funny how Hermione wanted to stay for the tightly-trousered crotches, LOL.

    I hope he makes it out of that awful prison before the baby is born...update soon!
    Report Review

  • From sdemelo on October 29, 2008
    ACK!!!!! Oh NO! :(
    Report Review

  • From ANON - doodle on October 29, 2008
    No!!!! I want to cry with him. Okay I'll calm down eventually, all good stories must twist. In the manor with Draco not surprised to see her, something to think about. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
    Report Review

  • From blueartemis on October 29, 2008
    Wow. That was a bit of something, wasn't it? I doubt Lucius would spank a pregnant Hermione, it wouldn't be good for her. What is Draco doing there? (Yes, I figure he lived in the Manor). Anyway, I didn't know when I was going to get to read this, since my little son decided to make an early entrance into this world, last Wednesday. He was in the NICU until Monday, and then decided to be nocturnal. He's sleeping now, so I'm OK. Yes, he's my first, and after 21 hours of labor and 5 days of NICU, I'm not quite sure he won't be my only.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!