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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Damiana on October 28, 2008
    chapter 47

    (review!)

    Dun dun dun!

    Egads! I didn't even think that he might be returned to prison... but if things are mostly back to "normal", why is Hermione in Malfoy Manor?
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 28, 2008
    Aw, the poor kids. I hope she's not with Draco now. That would be terrible after all they've been through. (Not that I'm against Hermione/Draco, but still...)

    I enjoyed that Lucius was saddened by the fact that the Veil didn't like him as much as it did Hermione. Trust him to pout about that.

    The money conversation was hilarious. Of course it would mean a great deal to Lucius, even more than if he died going back through. Idiot.

    I can't wait for more. I want to see how you resolve this and how they get back together. Poor Lucius, I do feel for him.

    Thanks for the well wishes for my new grandbaby. He's just beautiful.
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  • From ruckfules84 on October 27, 2008
    okay...that was just mean....i cried....poor lucius and hermione....after all that they got seperated...good stuff better happen missy *wags finger*...cause if not i am going to pout like there is no tomorrow..
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  • From ANON - Rini on October 27, 2008
    What
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  • From Damiana on October 27, 2008
    Chapter 47

    *points to the above number* You know...maybe if I had never read anything of yours and I saw a count above 60 I might think twice about getting started. Yet I expect that anyone who has moved past reading stories that go above 25 or 30 chapters will likely not feel particularly squeamish about getting more of a really good author's story (I mean you!). I tend to simply read large stories by spurts (and bookmark my current chapter in Explorer).

    Gah! With all that I haven't the time to read the chapter. Review to follow once I've read. :P
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  • From distinctlyME on October 27, 2008
    OMG
    I'm clearly one who reads but does not review. I apologize for that. I should really since I love this story so dearly, and if not for that but to return the favor of your wonderful reviews.

    My heart is breaking. Absolutely breaking for Lucius. I don't know why Lucius more so than Hermione, but it is. Probably because she was sent somewhere comforting, and with someone there, although I'm questioning Draco's appearance (I have a horrible feeling about it).

    Oh I hope the next installment is fast, I don't think my lil 'ol heart could take it if I were to wait too long! haha.

    I won't bothering with asking the questions you're sure to get about their seperation. I'll just wait impatiently to find out. haha

    Until next chapter.
    dM
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  • From dannilawless on October 27, 2008
    Ah poor Hermione!!!! I know Lucius is a changed man now but he still commited his crimes but if he's still married to Hermione, when would he have married her and gotten her pregnant. Does she still have her job in the ministry? if so she would still have easy access to the veil, will it council her on how to free her husband or has the veil ceased to interfere with their lives? Or.....will Lucius just convieniently get released on parrol?(I couldn't see you doing so so easily)
    My head hurts thinking of all the possabilities!!

    Great chapter though!!!
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  • From SailorSol on October 27, 2008
    Just read chapter 47.

    You heartless monster. :D

    I love it, more, please!
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  • From CarlaRush on October 27, 2008
    What an incredible story! I just cried when I got to the last posted chapter. It must be so hard for them now.
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  • From angelprince on October 27, 2008
    Well, that was unexpected!!!

    Let's see you write your way out of this one, Labib. You made Lucius cry!!!
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  • From jenlaranja on October 27, 2008
    I so hate you for the last part of this chapter!
    But the story really is amazing. I love how you put them in the past and your ideas. I never even suspected Gus, it's truly one of your best stories!
    And please, pretty please update soon, I'm dying to know what's happening!!!

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  • From ANON - Robyn Hawkes on October 27, 2008
    Well I,m puzzled. How come Draco seems all right with Hermione being in the Master bedroom while Lucius is in Azkaban?
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  • From on October 26, 2008
    *screams* Oh my goodness! I'm all panic-y (I don't know how to even spell it!) I was drawn in to that veil and the potential for a happy ending. I should have realised that you are far too clever to make it that easy. I eagerly await your next entry. Thanks! Goodness, I think I need to have a lie down....
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  • From ANON - Jesse on October 26, 2008
    OH NO!!! What is going on!!!?!!?!?!??! I need to know!! Update quickly please!!! I love this story, and I just can't believe that it is actually going to end!!! What a cliffy though!! HURRY PLEASE!!
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  • From tsorg on October 26, 2008
    Oh now you've left me pining......I wanted to cry with Lucius in his cell. What a totally exciting story and you aren't even done yet! I'm wondering of course what Hermione's relationship with Draco is.....
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