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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on October 26, 2008
    AH! You are so mean! Well, they made it back safely, but now we have to wonder how Hermione is going to get Lucius out and why Hermione is in the bedroom and if the baby made it safely. Great chapter. I love that dang arch, but I feel bad for Lucius. I hope you update soon!
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  • From Scarybearhair on October 26, 2008
    You know I was apprehensive reading this whole chapter. I kept thinking, if they are happy and snug-a-bug in their 19th century home, they shouldn
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  • From Clare1984 on October 26, 2008
    Aargh! Oh no, how can they be separated?

    I was panicking when they were gonna step through the Veil that there was going to be a terrible cliffhanger about where they would end up. Then Hermione's without Lucius although it's comforting that Draco isn't totally shocked to find her in his father's room. Poor Lucius, stuck in that nasty cell again. He's just lost with Hermione and he doesn't even know what's happened to her. I'm an emotional wreck with all this drama, woman!

    Awesome chapter and I can't wait to see what awaits them in this new future. I can't believe the story is almost done though. I want to know what happens but I don't want it to end either - I'm torn!


    I don't have LiveJournal but thanks for the offer. My story was just starting to come along but I've been distracted with writing a oneshot for Halloween with Draco. I will focus on Lucius once that's out of the way. After all, a wizard like Lucius deserves a lot of attention, in fact he demands it!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 26, 2008
    Chapter 47: I had completely forgotten about Lucius' prison sentence--He has at least five years left, if I remember correctly? And Gods, please, Please, PLEASE tell me she isn't married to Draco? But it is nice to see he's alive. Is the baby all right after the time trip? What about the academy? Ok, I'll shut up, now.
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  • From ANON - Shana on October 26, 2008
    Hey LaBib! I guess I've been a lurker for about two weeks while I was trying to catch up and read all of the chapters that you've posted, so now I am delurking. It's been a wonderful journey so far, and I hate that you're such a good writer, because I've been puting off a research paper that's due so that I could read your story. I can't believe Lucius still has eight more years in prison, agh, I didn't see that one coming. And Draco walking in on Hermione. OMG! Is she still Lucius' wife in this time period? I'm hoping so. Oh, and is Draco still married to whom ever and does he still have a child? Oh, and will Lynx get letters to go to their new schools like the other Hogwarts students, and what happens to children and grandchildren and greatgrandchildren and so forth and so on of Lynx and muggles who never show any magical abilities, are they still considered Lynx at that point or are they just considered muggles? If they are Lynx would they still be able to go to the new school? Ummmm, yeah so I guess that's all. Great Story!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 26, 2008
    Excellent. I hope that Hermione will be able to find a way to get Lucius released from Azkaban before their baby is born. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Shiv5468 on October 26, 2008
    Now that's an eeeeevil cliffhanger
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  • From Utopia on October 26, 2008
    I should actually be writing a review of the scientific literature for my uni project! oh well...

    Bad name, that! lol!

    It wants them to go back through. Why? They're happy! If it aint broke, don't fix it!

    Is it safe to go through the veil while pregnant? Surely that's quite dangerous to something so fragile as a foetus?

    Why's it suddenly all gone italic?

    So... Draco knows Hermione, Lucius is thrown back in Azkaban.

    What would I like to see...
    I want to see what the academy is like! And I'd like to see what happened to Filch! He's so badly mistreated at Hogwarts - and he could be so much more!

    Have any muggle technologies crossed into the magical world thanks to the Lynx? Is Arthur's obsession and 'taboo' with muggle items a thing of the past?

    I want to see Harry and Ron's reaction to her pregnancy and marriage... hang on a minute - has the veil transferred their legal documents about their marriage to this time? Are they married in the eyes of the law in the future?

    What happened to Narcissa if they are still married?

    What happened to the brothel - what is it in modern times? (Oh, I hope it isn't a Starbucks! Good grief! They're like a plague on shopping centers and highstreets! It would be awful for the brothel to be a bloody Starbucks!). I've an image of it being a really brilliant lingerie designer! Maybe they still make beautiful knickers!

    What else... are the little green 'sticks' still on the mantelpiece? And is Draco aware that they're not just ornaments?? I can see Hermione blushing, Lucius laughing and Draco not having a clue! lol!

    anything else... can't think of anything
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  • From Visitkarte on October 26, 2008
    You evil hag! That's a "thank you" for all good thing Lucius did? And Hermione ending with the spoiled child Draco? Urgh!
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  • From kitty08 on October 26, 2008
    ohh wow what a twist!! poor Lucius he must feel terrible. But he will be rescued wont he? please update soon!!!
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  • From Citten on October 26, 2008
    you so better be updating sooner than a week or i may just have to find you and mamne you until you do! :) poor lucius! poor hermione! well i cant wait to see what you have cooked up for a back story on this one! :) though 49 and an epiclog is just doesnt sound long enough. i am already looking forward to a new story just because this one is ending. hey question for you have you ever taught of a story where hermione goes back in time to when lucius was in school? i know i would love it if you wrote one! ;) well just a taught! i do love that she is in the manor though and draco knows her. she must be so distraught! the pain lucius must be in! i really hope that you update really, reallly, really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From StarKneazle on October 26, 2008
    I finally just got caught up on this story and I am so happy that I put in the time to read this wonderful, beautiful story.

    If I were to go chapter by chapter and list all the amazing things that I found in you story, we'd be here forever. So instead, I am going to write a blanket "Oh my GOD, that was just frigging amazing!!!!!!" And we're going to be done with that.

    Chapter 47:
    How could you do that to them? Does this mean that Hermione's married to Draco, but still carrying Lucius' kid? Because if so, wow. Even I wouldn't go there. . .

    Fantastic!!!!!
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  • From ANON - happybunny on October 26, 2008
    Love this story! But really, you need to think of your readers' blood pressures when you end chapters like that. Hmph. I am extremely curious about how you will close up this fic in only 2-3 chapters, it seems as though they just got dropped into a whole new set of problems. Though Hermione obviously is close to the Malfoy family in the new timeline, since Draco called her "Hermione." She better not be married to Draco. I would be very upset. Though I don't think you would do that after spending forty-some chapters getting Hermione and Lucius together. At least, I hope not :(
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  • From chickaboo on October 25, 2008
    But....and then....you....what....how....GET BACK HERE!! That was just cruel. I'm hurt that you would leave it so, truly I am. I may even cry. Yep, yes, here come the waterworks. lol Seriously great update, not to mention this latest twist. It totally didn't occur to me that lucius would be in Azkaban. And I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From AndreaLorraine on October 25, 2008
    You always have to make them suffer, don't you? :P

    I'm banking on Lucius being released for good behavior. OR having been put in prison for a different reason entirely, with a shorter sentence, and being released TOMORROW. I don't know that it would be possible for things to turn out exactly the same, not when Lucius and Hermione changed so much in the past. I suppose I'll just have to wait and see.
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