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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Rini on October 18, 2008
    Oh, sometimes the damsel in distress stories are relaxing because they
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  • From dannilawless on October 18, 2008
    Those names!!!!I laughed so hard I almost peed!! Almost!!
    Is this the wind down to the big finally??? I wonder what pre-natal care was like back in those days?? If this is indeed the wind-down can we have one more good tangy lemon cuz your so good at it! *Strokes ego*
    Maybe one more interesting painting???
    Please?? For me??? Since I was so good at reviewing????
    Much Love
    XxXx
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  • From AndreaLorraine on October 18, 2008
    Seriously, LaBib, this time YOU'RE reading MY mind. I'm Greek so I CONSTANTLY joke about naming children, pets, ANYTHING, Agamemnon and Clytemnestra! You're killing me. I'm practically peeing my pants over here.

    Good Veil, facilitating a wild sexy reward for Hermione & Lucius's good work.

    And YAY for confessions of love!
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  • From ruckfules84 on October 18, 2008
    Yay!! new chappie...

    hmm...Agamemnon for a boy? why not Tyndareus or Menelaus? sorry i just love old greek mythology type names.

    Thanks again for writing such fabulous stories. They make the week so much better :)
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on October 17, 2008
    @ 46

    I should have put this in my list last time I reviewed, so I'll do it now. I LOVE that Lucius smells like lime. I love lime and it seems to fit perfectly! Anyway, hooray for babies and confessions of love! What a sappy, sweet chapter! So, now that they are getting everything fixed, they should be heading back right? You're not going to leave them in the past are you? I know, I konw, you can't answer, but I can't help but ask! Good job! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 17, 2008
    Chapter 46:

    She had better do something about those names. No way should any child be saddled with them, unless they are ancient Greek and DEAD.

    I love the way the Veil coerced Hermione into confessing that she loved Lucius. I do think the Veil had something to do with the baby, but let Lucius think he was the one to screw up. He needs the practice in guilt.

    Great job on the !three hours! of sex. I want the veil to summon me, even if it is with my own husband (he's cute as a bug, but no Lucius Malfoy...)

    I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold.
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  • From blueartemis on October 17, 2008
    Considering I'm 8 months pregnant, I'm really quite willing to tell Lucius that those are not good names. That was quite a lovely chapter, I liked the hot sex, and the declarations of love were very sweet.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 17, 2008
    ***sigh**** I love babies....and I love men who get all gooey over babies.....
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  • From Phreakdom on October 17, 2008
    Ch. 46

    That was lovely! I
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 17, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. I am glad that they are having a baby.
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  • From ANON - WhiteWitch on October 17, 2008
    @46
    You are so much fun to read, I'm still smiling about Agg & Clyt.
    I love the naughty Veil, what a pleasant way of telling you you are right.
    And the baby scene was fantastic. The exchange of "Are you very unhappy?" Then Hermione's insecurity "Is it me?" and Lucius sweet "I never meant to take the decision away from you". Everything was perfect, including Lucius "You love me? Trully love me..."
    Sometimes a chapter flows perfectly and that is how I feel about this one.
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Mia on October 17, 2008
    I think Hermione should beat him about the head and neck with a broken bottle for even mentioning those horrible names. But she can't say she didn't have fair warning that Lucius would favor hideously pompous and impossibly wretched names for his child/ren. This was a marvelous chapter, and I have enjoyed it more than I probably should have. It's good to have you back love. But please, pretty pretty please, don't make me turn blue waiting for the next installation. A girl needs her fix, you know. Thank you, as always for sharing your devious and sensationally smutty mind with us. Ah who am I kidding. I don't care if you write for the rest of the population or not. But I'd happily lock you in a basement somewhere and force you to write for my own personal entertainment. Giggle. Don't be too frightened. I'm about as intimidating as a hairless chinchilla.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - Jesse on October 17, 2008
    Wow.. I'm not sure if I was expecting that or not!!! I am really in the air about it right now, but I am sure you will do an amazing job with it.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 17, 2008
    Er, Clytemnestra murdered her husband in his bath and then chopped up Cassandra, his concubine. I vote 'no' on that one. And a boy named 'Aggie' is going to have problems. Big ones, Malfoy or not. LOL. What about Beaufort (beautiful strength), Donald (world Conqueror),or Dominic (Ruling Lord)? Or Delinda (Of beauty), Zita (The Seeker-bit of a pun), or Thalassa (the sea), or Tezcocoatl (Serpent King in Aztec). They can nickname him Coco. Sorry, getting silly, there. Wonderful chapter, glad to know they solved it, but do they stay there or will they go home to a changed world? If their world is altered, they may no longer have a place in it, as well as having to adapt to changed memories, since the Voldemort wars may not have ever taken place, really.
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  • From ruckfules84 on October 14, 2008
    love this story....it i love the interaction between lucius and hermione..thanks for being so amazing...
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