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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Citten on October 08, 2008
    i think you did really well with the chapter! it is really hard to write time fics espically when you have to do the 'what ifs' and the 'possible' can be very confusing. i totally got it so now worries. loved the ending comment in authors note! :) really made me laugh! :) she really is and does lucius good he would have a hard time without her. well what is up next for our slowly maturing loving couple? :)
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  • From Kooldragon400 on October 08, 2008
    Ahh...I haven't left a review for a little while, but I decided that I would break that horrid habit. I have been following this story since the first, but I'm afraid I haven't been faithful enough to review. Each night, I always check (though I know that you have a few days between each update ^_^), and every time I see the chapter number go up, I grab my poodle in one arm, my computer in the other, and sit down for a bit of good reading. I love the Lumione genre, and more importantly, I love you. I have read all of your works, and have thoroughly enjoyed all of them. I myself find that when writing, my talents lie in the Dramione category, but I have been known to dabble in Lucissa as well. (All of those combined name category things confuse me....)

    You reviewed an old story of mine: The Malfoy Chronicles. I know that you are a very busy author, but it would honor me if you would look at one of my Dramione stories. My favorite is Upside Down. I'll be starting a new one as well, if you'll look out for it. It brings back James (my little dragon boy from The Malfoy Chronicles) and also throws in two major plotlines.

    Well, enough rambling about myself. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed as faithfully as others, but I promise that throughout the rest of this story, I'll drop you a nice review. Hope that we see an update soon.

    Luv, DragonFyre
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  • From voraciousreader on October 08, 2008
    Love it, love it, love it! Your plots are intricate and fascinating. And I really don't care where the Veil sent Nesbitt--he deserved worse. Now, will they be sent back to an altered future or is Lucius about to become his own grandfather?
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  • From ANON - Steph on October 08, 2008
    Yay, another chapter! Just when you think that maybe they've solved the problem, another spanner gets thrown into the works. Loved it, can't wait to read what happens next!
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  • From angelnomiko on October 08, 2008
    wow that was awsome ... please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Phreakdom on October 07, 2008
    Ch. 45

    That was brilliant! Your explanation of who the Master was and why he
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on October 07, 2008
    Wow - complex is dead on. I follow but I really thought the Master was a canon character. Witchy holding her tongue. Now, should they stay or go? Will the Veil entice them back through to send them back to their future to see the changes they have wrought? And, will they lose each other on the journey? Oh you evil bibliophile, more questions than answers!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 07, 2008
    Ah so the Voldemort Family Tree becomes part of the tale. Shame on Lucius for keeping secrets. Its always complicated when one is writing about time travel, trying to figure out just how much the actions of the persons going back will change the future. The whole space and time thing just gets confusing eh? Im not much into physics personally so it just gives me a headache to think on it too much =)


    So, the question is...have they altered what took place before they leapt through the veil and are things back to rights in their time...more to the point, will they go back or are they content to live out their lives in relative peace in their current time? Wouldnt it be ironic for one of their children to be a squib? Ah the questions......=)


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From AndreaLorraine on October 05, 2008
    Oh my lord, LaBib, I am so far behind. I have been enduring the fortnight from hell with school and work. Once I am through the next five days, I promise I will read and review all the chapters I'm missing. I'm sure they're great, anyhow, so I can say in advance: Good job!
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  • From dynonugget on October 04, 2008
    If the Malfoy heirs are expected, what happens when the REAL ones show up?
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  • From ANON - jw on October 04, 2008
    ch 44 - drat! I wanted to see the git get handed over to his victims. well, perhaps the Veil has an even more "appropriate" punishment for Nesbitt. turn him into a Squib or a Muggle? nah, that's too easy; he'd just be a mean Muggle and still terrorize people. thanks for the new chapter, and for keeping our fave couple safe!
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  • From dynonugget on October 03, 2008
    What an interesting progression of feelings between them! That trip to Diagon Alley will be interesting to be sure!
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  • From dynonugget on October 03, 2008
    Oh, this was so funny! Hermione spanking Lucius? Oh, if she balks, please allow me to offer my services! LOL.
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  • From dynonugget on October 03, 2008
    Another very good chapter. I like Hermione's body letting her know it's alright to find Lucius attractive. Thinking of him with red hair though was quite funny. Off to read your next...
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  • From ANON - Robyn Hawkes on October 03, 2008
    @44 If the veil is working for the good of society it should kill the lawyer.
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