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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - maddie50 on September 29, 2008
    OMG, six pages of mind blowing sex and then she says thank you, sir basically? These two are a riot. Hermione is a mess of insecurity and hang-ups and she has been emotionally scarred, I am sure. Each are afraid to show they care about the other. I bet Lucius could kick himself for offering "no strings" sex to Hermione in the first place.

    As for the Orb--a clue, at last!

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  • From ANON - maddie50 on September 29, 2008
    An insecure Lucius is a sight to behold. Hermione does keep saying things in what I would call Muggle terms (e.g. "working as a team"), and he in turn seems to take offense. This, I think, is one of the ways his confidence is being eroded. I believe they are having cultural misunderstandings.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on September 29, 2008
    Very interesting and inspiring bedroom artwork. The way your mind works is scary. It's too bad such things are not available in real life. Just for their educational value, mind you.

    I love the "[i]t's broad daylight out[]" remark made by Hermione. What a hoot.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on September 29, 2008
    Finally, I am catching up on my reading and reviewing. Wowsers, 23 chapters for consummation and it was well worth the wait. That was really hot.

    My favorite line this chapter, Lucius says: "You definitely have a way of keeping me humble."
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  • From dynonugget on September 29, 2008
    I like this determined Lucius. Hermione's got a good thing coming! ;)
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  • From pittwitch on September 29, 2008
    The Lawyer? Never thought of him! Dang! Go Hermione!

    Now, the answers seem so near, yet, so far.
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  • From on September 29, 2008
    I'm sorry I missed three chapters. I have issues...and I needn't have worried so much as far as your writing is concerned. Silly me. I'm just going to trust that you have a very tasteful take on all things erotic from now on.

    Regarding your latest chapter. Squee! I was freaking at the lawyer guy getting the upper hand...then, OMG second wand. Hermione is far to clever to be bested and/or helpless. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. It is safe to say...although I enjoy good smut, I'm happily in the mystery lover camp too! Thanks for the updates. Bless.
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  • From ANON - Robyn Hawkes on September 28, 2008
    I often wondered about 2nd and 3rd wands. Thank heavens Hermione had one.
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  • From ANON - jw on September 28, 2008
    ch 43 - squeeeeee!!!! you totally took me by surprise - the only thing I expected was that it was unexpected. you're fabulous at that! I just wish she had used her second wand to cast 'Petrificus Totalis' at the nasty git. now did he also have a hand in murdering the uncle's heir, the guy who drowned on his way to England? (if I recall accurately) oh, I'm so excited that Lucius suddenly stopped by! thanks for not letting the git zap her memories or hurt her!!
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  • From blueartemis on September 28, 2008
    That was excellent. I loved that the sleazy little lawyer totally underestimated the power that Hermione could use. I can't wait to see what they decide to do with him.
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  • From ANON - godblessemohair on September 28, 2008
    Hello! *waves enthusiastically* I happen to be one of the lurkers that you've been imploring to review. It just so happens that I only started reading your story yesterday (I was intimidated by the number of chapters versus the amount of studying I should be doing) and I've finally got to the latest chapter at this moment. I am very much impressed by the storyline and the amount of skill you've shown in developing it. I'm almost a bit jealous, lol. I can't wait to read more.

    I do have two questions for you. The first being why does Hermione refer to Voldermort as the Master? If that is indeed who she is referring to. As for the second... Well, I very much enjoy the kink interactions that have Lucius in the "submissive" position, but I'm left wanting for a bit of Hermione in bondage... So my question would be, will there be a bit of lemonade with a certain intelligent witch in a bound predicament anytime soon?

    Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. I'm looking forward to the next installment :)
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  • From ANON - shez on September 28, 2008
    What a very nasty little man! I'm glad Hermione got him bang to rights. Great idea about the extra wands - it seems only common sense that you'd be able to buy more than one (especially when Ron keeps breaking his). Spell-o-tape can only go so far, I'd imagine.

    Tricky situation now though, with the blackmail documents right there in Malfoy Manor. The Wizarding establishment of the day is going to be quite confounded by all this.

    Whatever next??????
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  • From Shiv5468 on September 28, 2008
    Thanks for updating. I am enjoying reading this.
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  • From Utopia on September 28, 2008
    Heck! That chapter moved so fast it was a case of 'blink and you've missed it!'.

    The blinking solicitor?! Hadn't seen that one coming! I'd twigged you're other mystery with the warden - but I had no idea with this one!

    Two wands, very clever - providing you can find two wands that will choose you.

    And Lucius thinks he's a guest? Or is it an accomplice who's polyjuiced - if polyjuice has been invented.
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    I just LOVED Lucius in this chapter! Sexy wizard riding in on his white horse to save her...

    Excellent, as every other chapter has been!
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