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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    Hopefully Lucius doesn't find success at that Brothel. The landlady seems rather observant...

    Seems like you've set up a few things in this chapter.

    Off to check out that recommended art!
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  • From ANON - doodle on September 27, 2008
    Love it! Love it! Love it! What a twisty turn of plot. It was not one of the gazillion plot lines I had come up with... I love it when that happens!
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    How interesting they went back and time, and THAT far back! Would anyone else have been transported back there, too?

    Lucius' growing arousal is very promising!
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 27, 2008
    Ooo LaBib! What an exciting chapter! So it
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    I'm wondering when AND where, now? And Lucius using a French accent has to be a clue!

    The imagery you use is one of your skills, I must say! I feel like I'm watching a movie!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 27, 2008
    An incredible chapter. I can't wait to read more to see what happens when Lucius learns the truth about the solicitor.
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    Of course they're bickering! It couldn't start any other way :)
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    Where is everyone else? Were things so far gone that no one was looking for her? Is this all a wild dream? LOL... idk... I'm just going to keep reading.

    Though seeing Lucius say "cow pie" had me snickering :)
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  • From dynonugget on September 27, 2008
    Oh, my! What an interesting premise. I've never read anything like it. I'm looking forward to where you're heading with this! Great start!
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 27, 2008
    Ooh, wonderful. I love your twistiness. Whenever I hear the name Nesbitt though, I flash back to the children's movie Toy Story. Where Buzz Lightyear has lost it and is pointing at his head saying:"You see the hat? I'm Mrs. Nesbitt!" Every time your evil little man comes into a scene I get the giggles. Lol. Thanks.

    ~Mia~
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  • From dannilawless on September 27, 2008
    Shock and horror! I didn't expect that at all. I thought it would have been one of the families that had been claiming that they were being blackmailed!

    Whatever will Lucius do??
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  • From angelprince on September 27, 2008
    Well! Didn't see that coming!

    I hope they nail this guys ass. Hermione told him about being a Muggleborn.

    Next instalment please!!!
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  • From ANON - Rini on September 27, 2008
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  • From chickaboo on September 27, 2008
    Oh I can just see Lucius being so proud of his little Hermione. lol Great update, I can't wait for Lucius's reaction!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 27, 2008
    OOOO....I do love when Mysteries begin to unravel.....
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