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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From QueenofPutrescense on September 27, 2008
    Ah, you're so good at this! Always a pleasure to see this one's been updated - it never disappoints!
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  • From Pumkin on September 26, 2008
    i hate it when you just cut it off like that. what will they do to him.i hope they tourcher him a little before they turn him in. please update soon please.
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  • From Phreakdom on September 26, 2008
    You had me worried for Hermione for a minute there. It was surprising to discover it was the old solicitor but it makes incredible sense. He
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  • From voraciousreader on September 26, 2008
    Lovely! I knew that 'wand sale' was going to come in somewhere! More please.
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  • From ANON - shez on September 26, 2008
    Hehe, hotness. I do think the granny nightie was a nice touch - I do actually find that kind of attire can be sexier than flat-out posing pouches and bodystockings.

    Loved that phrase about Hermione being ready for anal penetration when Diagon Alley becomes a shopping mall. Can you imagine Lucius at a mall? It would be excellent! I'll look out for him next time I'm at the Brunel Centre in Swindon (though that's hopefully never).

    Hermione's new knickers sound lovely too. You do fantastic clothes porn - if you ever get bored of this, you could write for Vogue maybe?

    Love it.
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  • From angelprince on September 26, 2008
    I bet Hermione is extremely grateful that you... err... Lucius fixed the problem with her knickers. There's something about lacy knickers that just make you feel sexy. Lucius will certainly reap the benefits.

    Is Lucius unaware that he has confessed his love to Hermione? Why wouldn't she want his love? She's totally besotted with the man. It could've been worse. She could've fallen through the veil with... Ron! (eew yucky)

    As always Labib, luv ya work :)
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 25, 2008
    Oh my god. I'm glad Hermione didn't have the tea with the ladies the day after that scene. They would have known something was up. What hotness, Lucius and his beautiful jade and tongue and Hermione's climax.

    I'm glad he finally admitted that he loved her, even if Hermione is still ambivalent about the feeling. Okay, she is a little bit of an idiot. She has the hottest wizard alive and still doesn't know if she wants to commit her heart, but well, at least they have the sex.

    Great job as always.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 25, 2008
    Too much lemon pie! What a thought! After all, you can never be too thin, too rich or have too much lemon pie. LOL

    Anyhoo lovely chapter my dear! I am late again. Sorry about that. :(
    I was scrambling to get my chapter up.

    I was laughing at Hermione
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  • From Damiana on September 24, 2008
    Lovely chapter LaBib!
    I think I could even go for a third helping of lemon pie...well perhaps it's best to save some for a different day. Otherwise the plot might start to intrude upon the lemons more than it did.

    I wonder what it is that Hermione is forgetting.

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  • From ANON - ShiningEyes on September 24, 2008
    Hiya, haven't read this for a couple of chapters cos my internet connections been dodgy (for dodgy read: pathetic). Really, I only have 5 words to say to sum up - I Want To Be Hermione. That's it, it's not much to ask is it?
    Great work as always, had to try to stop drooling!
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  • From ANON - Slytherin-Princess on September 24, 2008
    I absolutely loved it!! Its about time he voiced his love, even if it was in a blow-job induced stupor. I want lemons!! I also can
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  • From blueartemis on September 23, 2008
    That was really hot. I quite enjoyed the lemon pie. And I'm looking forward to the mystery.
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  • From Clare1984 on September 23, 2008
    so... many... lemons...

    Don't worry, I've recovered! Wow, another excellent chapter. I wondered when Hermione was going to get hers and boy did she! Although Lucius is a lucky boy with his thank you for those knickers. That is a very tantalising image of Lucius still in his shirt and waistcoat and naked from the waist down, a bit of peekaboo going on - mmm!

    Can't wait for more mystery - I really don't want this story to finish because it's just so fab.

    You could start a sideline on drool rags because with these lemons, you would have a roaring business! My computer did recover and just so you know, it doesn't smoke for every lemon on this site - just the most delicious ones!
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  • From voraciousreader on September 23, 2008
    Woo-HOO! Nicely done. Still, one question: Are they going to be running into Sirius, or is Sirius dead or in another part of time for the Veil? I can't really see him being a blackmailer, despite his Dark family connections. By the by, I may be wrong, but shouldn't Phineas Nigellus be Headmaster at this point?
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  • From ANON - Jesse on September 23, 2008
    Hmmm.. not as good as when Lucius was getting it, but I still enjoyed it. I was going to say that I am getting sick of lemon pie... but I don't think there will ever come a day! :)
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